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Great chapter as always! The story just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work and update soon!

Chapter 13... I really LOVE how you e Hee Hermione\'s father!!! He shows all the signs of a real father who wants to do nothing more than protect his little girl... PERFECT!!! I do like her mom as well, trying to be a bit of a mediator, but still showing concern for Hermione!!!

I do like how Sevrus & Hermione got a few things out in the open & I look forward to seeing them get to know each other better!!! I will also enjoy seeing how her parents take to Severus after they see his home & spend more time with him os tus turf!!! I think they will be pleasantly surprised at just how right he is for their daughter!!!

The end of this chapter was the best way it could have ended!!! Dad always knows!!!

I\'m still curious to find out more about Draco as well as watching Severus & Hermione\'s relationship change & grow!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<

I really loved this chapter. Her parents reacted how I would thought they would. I also like the fact that Hermione disapperated to her room the safe place that she had know as a child nice touch. I also liked the line \"You got it bad, mate.\" I litterally giggled at that.

Hmmm...the bilingual review:

First off, this story is progressing beautifully. While I may be lax about reviewing each chapter, I do love it. Yay for smut. I\'m WAITING.

Zweite, ich spreche auch Deutsch...manchmal. Ich bin er gelernt, weil ich in Universitaet bin. Hoffentlich, werde ich sehr viel lernen. Auch hoffentlich werden Sie dieses Geschicte schneller schreiben.

Great Stoy! I like the idea of hermoine have to choose and the different guys going after her. But whats up with Darco? Does he like her...i thought he was gay? Anywayz You have a great story and an awsome style of writing. Your descrve wve without being boring. Your also informatinve with draggin on. Your a great er! er! Keep up the good work!

Sarah

Wonderful.
this chapter was really sweet, i think rose should get over it ... moine and sev are ment for each other!~!!!!!! keep writing
Love April

Your story is going beautifully. Am always impressed by writers that can really take their time building a story, and you do just that. Thank you for a great read and I am looking forward to more.

I love this story. Love it, love it, love it! Did I mention that I\'m enjoying this story? Oh, and now that our beloved Severus is well on his way to wedded bliss with Hermione, I don\'t suppose I could borrose ose for a bit? I\'d send him back Next Day Air and (relatively) unscathed! Seriously, it\'s great that you gave Hermione three really good, valid, contract choices instead of making SS the best of a bad lot. It adds so much depth to the story. I also like that SS was watching over the Grangers for the Order -- it makes such a nice touch. You have a marvelous way with plot development and the written word.
Very much looking forward to updates.

This just keeps getting better and better. I look for updates regularly and was glas to see this one. Your writing evereverus in particular, I love the idea of the gentle man behind the Snark.

Jeanette

Another great chapter! Can\'t wait for more, and I\'m curious as to who Aubrey is (was). I wanna see what Hermione\'s father does!!!