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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
De-lurking to say YES!!!!! Sevie\'s got it bad, Sevie\'s got it bad! I can\'t stand it when Hermione\'s parents play the stubborn role and don\'t see that Severus is only thinking about Hermione.
Good writing, and great flow!
Heather
Good writing, and great flow!
Heather
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
De-lurking to say YES!!!!! Sevie\'s got it bad, Sevie\'s got it bad! I can\'t stand it when Hermione\'s parents play the stubborn role and don\'t see that Severus is only thinking about Hermione.
Good writing, and great flow!
Heather
Good writing, and great flow!
Heather
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*heh* I don\'t know if I\'m a lurker or not. But I hereby delurk. I\'m LOVING it. :) Thank you thank you thank you.
w wrw write more!! :)
~ R
w wrw write more!! :)
~ R
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has been a fun read! Snape irhaprhaps my favourite HP character (one of them, in any case) and this is one of the most interesting Snape stories. The idea of Snape and Hermione as a couple struck me as rather odd at first, but it intrigued me all the same. I\'m looking forward to more chapters :) By the by, your story is all the more enjoyable because you write good English, with none of the silly grammatical mistakes and annoying typos that are so prevalent in fanfics.
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lurker here, reviewing as asked. I know I should review yet I never do :( I am really enjoying this story though and hope to see more soon.
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay okay... de-lurking. I love this take on the challenge. I like that they don\'t just fall in love and that you are slowly building the characters up to a point where you believe that it *could* actually happen. Well done.
Please update soon! (like I\"m anybody who should be talking)
Karena Elizabeth
Please update soon! (like I\"m anybody who should be talking)
Karena Elizabeth
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a great story, really making severus work to get hermione in this one, I love it! Rons comments are too funny, and Wubby made me grin.
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! I\'ve been following it for a week or so, and it always leaves me wanting more. The only thing I have to say is; Cheesecake? Hermione\'s parents are dentists who send their daughter sugarfree candy! But other than that, it\'s great, keep going!
I really appreciate the character of Rose. It\'s really hard to write original wizards in plots with established characters, and make them believable. Good job!
I really appreciate the character of Rose. It\'s really hard to write original wizards in plots with established characters, and make them believable. Good job!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovely couple of chps if i do say so myself! i really like how things are going w/severus and hermione, they seem to really like each other. u speak german? thats cool! anyways i hope u update soon b/c im dying to hear about lucius\' responce to hermione\'s decision. and everyones reaction at school. i feel really bad for rose though, he really liked her. but i guess it was for their own good. but i reallyt wat wait for snape and hermione\'s wedding! i bet it\'ll be wonderfull! dont forget to update!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You got it bad, mate What a great twist! I really like the way you\'ve characterized Hermione\'s parents--they\'ve got depth you don\'t usually see in supporting OCs. Good job; keep it up :) I look forward to the next chapter.