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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Glinda! I just read the whole thing in one shot and it\'s spectacular! I love the way you set up the story and worked with the characters. Loved Snape\'s little dream. That\'s why you were my original smut writing mentor; you\'re the best.
Don\'t be writing that I made you too depressed to write again. With the following you\'ve got on this story, I\'ll have your fans coming after me! Of course I just spent all of my writing time reading your story, so my next chapter is going to be a day late. ;-)
This is where I go all fangirly on you: More!!!!!!!!
Great story!
Don\'t be writing that I made you too depressed to write again. With the following you\'ve got on this story, I\'ll have your fans coming after me! Of course I just spent all of my writing time reading your story, so my next chapter is going to be a day late. ;-)
This is where I go all fangirly on you: More!!!!!!!!
Great story!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you are BLOODY BRILLIANT! This is the best story in the history of ss/hg history!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Rose needs to get over it and move on. She chose someone else for Christ sake. And Hermione needs to tell him to leave her alone and quite thinking he\'s protecting her from Severus, since she so obviously wants to be with him.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Applause*! I particularly liked your giving Severus two delightful instances of
the old-style vernacular. Very amusing. Courtesan is such a beautiful word.
And: Brava! I haven\'t seen the word Cuckold used in the right context since
I last sang Le Nozze Di Figaro in English. What a charming and rich wordy
world we once used to live in. Thanks for keeping the faith, and for the points
(sniggers knowingly) Blessings! Kait x
the old-style vernacular. Very amusing. Courtesan is such a beautiful word.
And: Brava! I haven\'t seen the word Cuckold used in the right context since
I last sang Le Nozze Di Figaro in English. What a charming and rich wordy
world we once used to live in. Thanks for keeping the faith, and for the points
(sniggers knowingly) Blessings! Kait x
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! YES! I\'m so happy that you are includi Nev Neville/Draco pairing in this story. I have always thought that that would be one of the sexiest pairings possible. I really hope that you continue to write this story. It\'s so good. And I like that Hermione isn\'t this innocent little virgin. She\'s strong and smart and is aware of her sexual needs. YAY!!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow oh wow! this is wonderful! i honestly didnt expect Nev to be the one draco was with, but mostly because im a Harry/Draco fan. but this is just so...perfect. it fits so well in this story. every time Hermione and Severus kiss my chest gets tight and i just LOVE this story! thanks for posting and PLEASE keep writing! :)
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neville?! Huh? Okay, will admit, my first reaction was, \"No! Draco\'s shagging Harry!\". Neville. Okay, that\'s different. *shrug* will get used to it, I guess! LoL!
Okay, now, onto the S/Hrm review bit...am absolutely loving it! I adore Severus\' jealousy, it\'s so funny that Hermione doesn\'t quite get it. I think this is a great story, and I\'m really glad you didn\'t have her suddenly forget about Rose. Made everything so much more real.
Okay, now, onto the S/Hrm review bit...am absolutely loving it! I adore Severus\' jealousy, it\'s so funny that Hermione doesn\'t quite get it. I think this is a great story, and I\'m really glad you didn\'t have her suddenly forget about Rose. Made everything so much more real.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit i liked chapter 15. I thought it very intersting when you had rose show up at the lecture, and then afterwards in the resturant. What was even better about the chapter was Neville is Dracos lover and all of this time i thought it was Harry. well keep up the great work
snapes daughter
snapes daughter
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, darn!! There\'s not more... This is excellent, and I was actually thinking Ginny might be making arrangements for a petition of her own. Hmmmm, package.....
Looking forward to the next installment
Looking forward to the next installment
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mornin\' (for it is 3am here)
Glinda, I have been meaning to sit down and read this for a long time, but because
I\'ve been so busy writing Puzzles I haven\'t had time. I\'m very impressed with all
your twists and turns, and am still baffled as to what Ginny might be up to, UNLESS
it\'s because at 17, and she a pureblood witch, she is also subject to the Marriage
Law. I\'d plump for this, if pushed, so if I\'m right then if you wouldn\'t mind, the
points should go to Ravenclaw, because I got kicked out of Slytherin for being too
much of a smart-arse.
Right, where was I? Oh yes - I\'m really enjoying The Rules Of Engagement, you do
write very descriptively, I could almosar Par Pansy shouting at Violet (in a South
London accent). Now, I\'m not going to Brit-pick because although we don\'t use words
like \"sidewalk\" (that\'d be \'pavement\') in the UK, it\'s perfectly all right by me to read
the foreign-sounding words and work it out for myself. We do get American TV \"shows\"
in the UK, after all. My paternal grandpa always said, \'Never let the truth get in the way
of a good story.\'
Besides, it\'s YOUR ruddy fiction, all right?
And the story is great reading! I\'m very intrigued as to how long it will take before
Hermione finally convinces Severus she\'s not going to vanish in a puff of smoke if
he so much as touches her! A faint-hearted Severus...how refreshing! Loved the
House Elf family, especially the matriarchal Wubby who seems to be taking on Yoda-
like proportions in my poor addled brain! My particularly favourite scene is the touching
moment when Hermione ceases to become a girl trying on frocks and becomes a beautiful
woman, in Severus\' eyes. Very moving indeed, and I loved how you split that scene so
that we could enjoy it from both points of view - Severus\' and Hermione\'s.
Get to the point, Kait. Oh yes. Bloody marvellous tale you\'re weaving, and it\'s so refreshing
to read a GOOD Marriage Law story. There aren\'t many of them ab
Blessings, clear and bright, Kait (LovesThePotionBoy)
Glinda, I have been meaning to sit down and read this for a long time, but because
I\'ve been so busy writing Puzzles I haven\'t had time. I\'m very impressed with all
your twists and turns, and am still baffled as to what Ginny might be up to, UNLESS
it\'s because at 17, and she a pureblood witch, she is also subject to the Marriage
Law. I\'d plump for this, if pushed, so if I\'m right then if you wouldn\'t mind, the
points should go to Ravenclaw, because I got kicked out of Slytherin for being too
much of a smart-arse.
Right, where was I? Oh yes - I\'m really enjoying The Rules Of Engagement, you do
write very descriptively, I could almosar Par Pansy shouting at Violet (in a South
London accent). Now, I\'m not going to Brit-pick because although we don\'t use words
like \"sidewalk\" (that\'d be \'pavement\') in the UK, it\'s perfectly all right by me to read
the foreign-sounding words and work it out for myself. We do get American TV \"shows\"
in the UK, after all. My paternal grandpa always said, \'Never let the truth get in the way
of a good story.\'
Besides, it\'s YOUR ruddy fiction, all right?
And the story is great reading! I\'m very intrigued as to how long it will take before
Hermione finally convinces Severus she\'s not going to vanish in a puff of smoke if
he so much as touches her! A faint-hearted Severus...how refreshing! Loved the
House Elf family, especially the matriarchal Wubby who seems to be taking on Yoda-
like proportions in my poor addled brain! My particularly favourite scene is the touching
moment when Hermione ceases to become a girl trying on frocks and becomes a beautiful
woman, in Severus\' eyes. Very moving indeed, and I loved how you split that scene so
that we could enjoy it from both points of view - Severus\' and Hermione\'s.
Get to the point, Kait. Oh yes. Bloody marvellous tale you\'re weaving, and it\'s so refreshing
to read a GOOD Marriage Law story. There aren\'t many of them ab
Blessings, clear and bright, Kait (LovesThePotionBoy)