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for The Rules of Engagement

by GlindaTrisstt

person Rycca
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well. I spent the past four hours reading this story, and to my delight and relief, I LOVED IT! It\'s so difficult to find a truly exceptional Marriage Law fic, and your writing is fantastic!

Oh, by the way, \"cuckholded\" fits perfectly. Gave me goosebumps and everything.
person JasperPress77
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...Iway,way, I want Hermione to end up with Green b/c he\'s such a sweet guy and matches her intellect well. But, I think Hermione needs someone to yell at every now and then considering she\'s the one usually getting onto Harry and Ron. Nice chapter and I will be reading more. :-)
person Kathy
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please.....I need more. Soon! This is great.
person Texas Peach
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I love how you\'ve written so much more into established characters. Please continue
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It just keeps getting better and better. Do most women really have sex on the 3rd date? I must be more old-fashioned than I thought! My husband and I dated 3-4 days a week for 5 weeks before I even considered having sex with him. After that, we had sex at least twice a day for a solid 3 months. :) I know, too much information! Great story. UPDATE SOON!!!
person FlasFlashB
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, a jealous Snape! RRRRRRRRowwwwwwl... Loved your frisky Lupin, glad he is feeling better. Just knew the first bit HAD to be a dream, but thanks for the lemony teaser. I believe the way you\'ve written Severus is right-on, loved the way Hermione got a handle on him. Cuckold... ROFL! Great chapter hon, loojing forward to the weekend.
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, to clarify the old-fashioned statement. I am only 24 - apparently just very old fashioned! My husband and I got married 5 months after we met, and we\'ve been together 4 years now. Happy times!
person Kyizi
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I adore this fic! I really love Severus\' possessiveness, your characterisation of him seems really well thought out. Hermione, as well, is very much in character, and I love the gentle teasing she\'s becoming accustomed to with him. I really can\'t wait to read more of this fic. :)
person mele
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm... i have no idea what ginny\'s up to and it can\'t be lupin. so i\'m putting in a review so i can look have a look at lovesthepotionsboy review! love the story. poor rose! poor severus! aloha, mele
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16... Another FANTASTIC chapter!!! I do hope that Hermione will make some of Severus\' dreams come true soon;-)

I LOVE the conversation between Remus & Severus!!! For Severus being such a hard ass, Remus sure can get to him pretty easily!!!

I still feel badly for Rose!!! I do wish that Hermione could tell him that he is in danger!!! This situation got to point something out to Hermione, Severus is afraid he will lose her!!! I do think she showed him he had nothing tor inr in a very good way!!! I am looking forward to seeing how the weekend goes!!!

Til chapt7, D7, Deb >^..^<