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for The Rules of Engagement

by GlindaTrisstt

person Angus Hardie
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really enjoyed reading this story so far.
Hermione\'s parents are a really clever touch and I love Snape\'s house elves. :-)
The way you\'ve written the relationship between Snape and Hermione is really nice,
it hasn\'t progressed too quickly which I think is good, instead it\'s moved more slowly.

Thank you for writing and I\'m really looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person Hawklaw
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I meant to review this chapter when it first appeared, but got sidetracked by the kids...so let me just say WOW! As always, you are g a g a fantastic job of realistically developing the relationship between Hermione and Severus. I enjoy your writing style, and you always manage to be descriptive without being overly wordy. By the way, I agree about Graves being a better Remus. ;)
person buttercup
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. You always strike such a great balance between description and dialogue. I\'ll have to check out the Lupin that lives in your head. The one that lives in my head is Ralph Fiennes. I know I have said this before, but if Thewlis insinuates himself into my head, my days of writing Lupin porn are over! Quick, finish your Lupin centric story before PoA comes out and ruins the werewolf for all of us. ;-)

Looking forward to your next chapter!
person JasperPress77
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading chapter 17...How do love thee fanfic? Let me count the quills...This fic has been both romanitcally intoxicating and a nice edge of quirkiness (nore ire if that\'s a real word). Beautifully done! Write more soon :-)
person droxy
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sweet chapter. The romantic tension is starting to kill me, but that is a good thing.

I like that you are spending time with the Grangers, most MLC stories don\'t do this.
person Amanda (hcbroncochick)
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! again, excellent story. hehe, I liked the part where Hermoine tells Severus that she has this vision of him and Cinders snuggled up on his bed. hehe. Hope you add the next chapter soon!! I can\'t wait to see what Wubby thinks of Hermoine\'s dad. :)
person Princess
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey glinda, thankyou for updating. this fic was just the potion cure for my crappy day!:-).
please update really soon, i love this fic. i even have my non hg/ss shipper friend hooked!!!! shows was a great thing you have going.
keep up the great work.
Princess
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that the Grangers warmed up to the idea of the marriage. Also glad that Severus is warming up to the idea of being close to Hermione in a physical way. They are building trust and I think it is sooooo sweet.

Rupert Graves is okay, but I have a casting fav. I personally think Robson Green would have made an excellent Remus Lupin, but that is just my 2 cents (pence).
person Loopy Loony Luna
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter. It should be interesting to find out what Mr. Granger and Wubby have been up to. I checked out the Rupert Graves site you recommended and can definately see why you picture him as Remus. He seems to be a very prolific actor as well.
person Snapeaholic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter as always! Love the intereaction between Snape and Hermione as they are getting know one another more *intimately*. :) Keep up the good work and update soon! It always makes my day to see a new installment from you!