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REally liked this chapter. Great story, can\'t wait for more.

Lovely! As usual! Ooo I wish you could write faster (but I know writing takes time :P) Too bad we can\'t just magic it.

I have a question sorta... Wubby is Snape\om\'om\'s house elf right? And Wubby only serve those with his mother\'s blood. Wouldn\'bby bby therefore serve Snape? And become a Snape house elf? Because he is after allt oft of his mom. 23 Chorms, exactly half. But as it is obvious Sev can\'t get Wubby to listen to him half the time, couldn\'t Hermione (as a muggle with a wide variety of interests from her before Hogwarts schooling and is conviently a person who reads everything she can get her hands on) present a case to Wubby? After all her child will be half Snape, and a quarter Av...(I\'m tempted to say Avery but that doesn\'t look right)? However that all hinges on the fact that Hermione is willing to understand Wubby and not get all SPEW representative to the poor house elf.

More soon!

Somehow I doubt that Wubby would mind cooking for all of those people. ;) And I love that Remus was the one to point out that Severus was in love with Hermione.

Who could play an older Hermione? There is an actress i like, I think her name is Rachael Wise, you know, she was in The Mummy. That is how I picture Hermione. Oh, btw, great story, I\'m really enjoying it!

Each chapter is better than the last. Loved the way Hermione dealt with him in the beginning. Her hand over his mouth to shut him up was a great visual. I also liked Snape\'s interactions with Mr. Granger and Remus. Isn\'t great to have the werewolf fertility monitor around when you need it? I\'m sure he put Severus\' mind at ease. And to answer you question, yes, I coined the term Potterotica as I was writing your review, although I\'m sure I\'m not the first to come up with it. Glad you liked it.

Warning: The next paragraph contains extreme fangirly sentiments. Read at your own risk.

More!!! I can\'t wait until the next chapter. I want the wedding. I want to know if the werewolf\'s nose was right or is there a bun in the oven. Write faster Glinda! Write faster!

all i can say is i can\'t wait for more - perhaps this is one of the best sev/hermione fics i\'ve read in terms of characterizations, realistic scenarios and honest emotions.... by far the best marriage law challenge response yet.
thank you for sharing your work with us; i found your fic through WIKTT at yahoo, someone suggested it and i read all 18 chapters in one night!
Please update soon
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nice chapter! i hope you can find some time to update again soon. i really enjoy reading this story so i\'de be sad if you didnt update quickly. good luck with the in-laws!

Oh my! that was a WONDERFUL chapter! I cant really explain what i\'m feeling, the words that come to mind just dont seem right, but the part where Sev thinks that she is crying tore my heart out and his posesiveness was a great dl. il. im so glad she ran after him and that she has the brains to figure out to send the elf after him, and her convo with Wubby was a really good touch. thanks SO much for posting and i hope your hols went well.

This is great. I couldn\'t stop reading. Please keep writing!

Hi there! I have been remise in responding to your story and I apoligize. I have been looking foward to your regular updates, as I am enjoying your story so much. I truly enjoyed the last chapter. I could just see Hermione\'s face when Wubby ( who is by far the best House Elf character I have seen thus far) transfigured her mother into a table. When I envisioned it I saw a very elegant table as would only fit both the Snape Manor decor and Hermione\'s mother herself.
Well, suffice it to say I love this story. I wish you the best of luck dealing with your in-laws. Hosting can be crazy, especially with long stays. I suggest bubble baths with candles to unwind and remember to smile! (And think to yourself that no matter how crazy things get the next huge holiday time is 7 months away:)
Happy Holiday!