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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I kind of just wish Snape would get on with telling her about Aubrey already. Ye kno know it\'s hard to discuss past loves, but I have no doubt that she\'d understand and it might help give her more insight into her future husband.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20... I am glad that Neville & Hermione had their talk & it was good for him to be able to talk about Draco!!! Now she can also go back to Severus after her shopping trip & not have to stop;-) I also like how you had Severus put Neville & Draco together.... he has a good heart, just won\'t admit it!!!
What is going to happen to Remus?!? You won\'t let him die will you PLE PLEASE say that you won\'t let him die!!! He is a very good companion for Severus & I am hoping that he & Hermione will be able to figure out what is wrong with him!!!
I really like the talk that they had in her room & am looking forward to the time that he feels comfortable enough to tell her about Aubrey!!! I do think that her actions, at times even more than her words, are putting him more at ease in their relationship!!! Can\'t wait to see how he reacts when Hermione shows him what she\'s buying on her shopping trip!!!
Very much looking forward to chapter 21!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
What is going to happen to Remus?!? You won\'t let him die will you PLE PLEASE say that you won\'t let him die!!! He is a very good companion for Severus & I am hoping that he & Hermione will be able to figure out what is wrong with him!!!
I really like the talk that they had in her room & am looking forward to the time that he feels comfortable enough to tell her about Aubrey!!! I do think that her actions, at times even more than her words, are putting him more at ease in their relationship!!! Can\'t wait to see how he reacts when Hermione shows him what she\'s buying on her shopping trip!!!
Very much looking forward to chapter 21!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sputters* Don\'t forget to review!!! As if I would! This is so great! It\'s about time you updated! I was starting to worry!
I hope Remus is going to be okay!!! And I loved the Snape/Hermione action! YUM! Hope Harry doesn\'t bust a nut when he finds out why they are going into muggle London! LOL!
I hope Remus is going to be okay!!! And I loved the Snape/Hermione action! YUM! Hope Harry doesn\'t bust a nut when he finds out why they are going into muggle London! LOL!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me share with you some words that I heard quite often recently. You\'d better not kill Remus! Ah, thats better. Great chapter again. Neville\'s grown up quite nicely in your Potterverse. I can\'t wait to see how Severus deals with the muggle birthcontrol contraption.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those two puppet links at thetom tom are hysterical! Thanks for the suggestion.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous. Heady. Electric. Sublime. Ambrosial.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, lurking lurking around chapter 12. You caught me. This was delightfully funny. I\'m on to read the rest and give a big huggy review at the rest. Sorry I hadn\'t read this yet. I sometimes just get caught up in RL.
Don\'t you just hate it when that happens? sita:)
Don\'t you just hate it when that happens? sita:)
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The very first paragraph if the Partners chapter is brilliant imagery of a hangover. I love the line \"his own voice hurt his head\".
Fantastic HG dialog throughout this story and I really like this Hermione. \"I\'m going to yell either way. Your choice.\" \"Don\'t. Don\'t ever settle.\"
Nice romantic imagery too. \"he wanted to savor her desire..a treat he never thought to taste\". I just melted like butter in a microwave on that line. Also the very tender scene, \" kissed her cheeks tasting the salty trails of her sadness had left.\" Damn, that is so romantic.
Good you are showing SS isn\'t a bigot, and the line about allure of a Gryffindor sounds like a great title for another fanfic. =>.
Liked that Snape bristles at the mention of Rose.
The Lupin-Snape dialog is well done. I like Lupin as counselor. I am wondering if Lupin will also talk to Hermione.
Please update soon. I can\'t wait for the wedding or for meddling Lucius Malfoy.
BTY- I\'m the one asking who would make a good HG. Someone suggested Kate Winslet. I\'d go for that assessment. As far as Rickman Snape, I guess I have 4 types of Snape visions in my head. Most suggestions are too handsome IMHO. I do think Leonard Nimoy would have made a great Snape, and he has a nice voice too. However, Rickman is a great actor and it\'s hard to imagine anyone else doing Snape now.
Fantastic HG dialog throughout this story and I really like this Hermione. \"I\'m going to yell either way. Your choice.\" \"Don\'t. Don\'t ever settle.\"
Nice romantic imagery too. \"he wanted to savor her desire..a treat he never thought to taste\". I just melted like butter in a microwave on that line. Also the very tender scene, \" kissed her cheeks tasting the salty trails of her sadness had left.\" Damn, that is so romantic.
Good you are showing SS isn\'t a bigot, and the line about allure of a Gryffindor sounds like a great title for another fanfic. =>.
Liked that Snape bristles at the mention of Rose.
The Lupin-Snape dialog is well done. I like Lupin as counselor. I am wondering if Lupin will also talk to Hermione.
Please update soon. I can\'t wait for the wedding or for meddling Lucius Malfoy.
BTY- I\'m the one asking who would make a good HG. Someone suggested Kate Winslet. I\'d go for that assessment. As far as Rickman Snape, I guess I have 4 types of Snape visions in my head. Most suggestions are too handsome IMHO. I do think Leonard Nimoy would have made a great Snape, and he has a nice voice too. However, Rickman is a great actor and it\'s hard to imagine anyone else doing Snape now.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I like the Draco and Neville pairing. Neville deserves to be loved by a sex god! We all do! LOL
I love they way you write. You have a gift for story telling. Please write more!
I love they way you write. You have a gift for story telling. Please write more!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is weird...by the way i love your story.....when I first saw the young actress playing Hermione Granger, I turned to my sister and told her that she looks a lot like Catherine Mary Stewart......the actress was in \"Night Of the COmets\" \"the last starfighter\" and lots of other movies from my youth.....and Emma Watson looks like a young version of her... heres a website if your curious about her http:/.cat.catherinemarystewart.com/