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i just love this story. i hope you post more soon.

I love your story...I have from the beginning. But I am angry with you.

How dare you state you are going to withdraw your story from this site, after the readers have waited over many months for a update.

If you withdraw from this site I will never seek the ending. I do not care how busy or problems you have. You have drawn out this story over YEARS.

I have suffered Cancer, Mourned, Parents and Miscarriages. When I decided to post my stories I made a oath, one I belief every writer should pledge.

YOU HAVE NO GOD GIVEN RIGHT TO WITHDRAW YOUR STORY...You posted it, you owe it to your readers to continue to post it on this site until it's finished.

For all I have flamed, much to my sadness. I still think it's the best Marriage Law story on the net. However much to my dismay if you withdraw it from this site, then I will never seek the ending.
Best wishes, Donavon.

Great chapter! I'm glad Severus is not avoiding Hermione anymore. What's going on with Lupin? Is he upset that Tonks is marrying Ron? Did he want to have a relationship with her? What does he feel about Annya? I hope the next chapter solves these questions (and that it comes soon!).

Just finished Chapter 7; I am enjoying this story very much. Altering clothes by wand is wonderful and makes me so jealous. It's 1:45AM, and I should go to bed but I want to read more.

Just finished chapter 30 - it's 3:30 in the morning (according to my clock) and it was worth every minute.

Ok I like the storie but what happend to rose? I mean from my exprince guys just don't disappear unfortunatly.Like I said i love the fic but come on put rose back or do somthig to make snape jelouse or angrey agian. Have him corner some guy and threaten them with there life or somthing if they don't leave his bride-to-be alone.

P.S. Im not telling you how to right your storie just give my opinion of wat i think it's missing.

Oh hey you said charlies single make him put the moves on her. or bring victor krum back into the picter. or we could always go back to rose. I just want snape angery for some unknown reasson.

love the fanfiction. update soon.

another great chapter and cliffhanger. please post the next chapter soon.

I love this story. I really do!

NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! *SOBS* i want more! I love love love this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

::grins madly:: love it. Ron and Tonks are great, and Hermione and Severus teasing each other is so much fun. I liked the bit at the end with Harry too. Wonder what's up with Draco but most of all I'm just so thankful that you've posted. love this story so very much. ::hugs::!!!