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Hiya! Awesome story - and I seriously mean that! I\'ve only taken the time to review like, two, other stories I\'ve read on here - cause I\'m a picky reader. And I\'ve spent most of this night reading what you\'ve written so far on this story, and I must say it is incredible! You\'ve done a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character, but at the same time have made them your own characters. I\'m feeling for all of them - especially Lupin, since he\'s so sick. So please, please, please update this story soon - I\'m anxious to read more!
Keep up the great work! 8~D
~ptc~

I have to be honest with you, I love you story. I found it yesterday about 8:47 pm and I told myself that I would read until 11pm and go to bed so I wouldn\'t be tired for work in the morning. The next thing I knew it was 2am and I was on chap. 21. I wanted to finish it but I just couldn\'t, I knew i was going to have a bad day at work, due to raising situations, so I left the remaining chaps for tonight giving me something to look forward to, and toe mye my mind off work some. I must say it worked like a ch I I thought about your story all day and wondered about what was going to happen, and that put me in my own little world which made me not pay any attention to the work place around me.. Soo, Please keep up the great work!! Can\'t wait for more, your doing an AWESOME job!! Happy Writing!

Star Fire ^_^

I have to be honest with you, I love you story. I found it yesterday about 8:47 pm and I told myself that I would read until 11pm and go to bed so I wouldn\'t be tired for work in the morning. The next thing I knew it was 2am and I was on chap. 21. I wanted to finish it but I just couldn\'t, I knew i was going to have a bad day at work, due to raising situations, so I left the remaining chaps for tonight giving me something to look forward to, and to take my mind off work some. I must say it worked like a charm. I thought about your story all day and wondered about what was going to happen, and that put me in my own little world which made me not pay any attention to the work place around me.. Soo, Please keep up the great work!! Can\'t wait for more, your doing an AWESOME job!! Happy Writing!

Star Fire ^_^

I have to be honest with you, I love you story. I found it yesterday about 8:47 pm and I told myself that I would read until 11pm and go to bed so I wouldn\'t be tired for work in the morning. The next thing I knew it was 2am and I was on chap. 21. I wanted to finish it but I just couldn\'t, I knew i was going to have a bad day at work, due to raising situations, so I left the remaining chaps for tonight giving me something to look forward to, and to take my mind off work some. I must say it worked like a charm. I thought about your story all day and wondered about what was going to happen, and that put me in my own little world which made me not pay any attention to the work place around me.. Soo, Please keep up the great work!! Can\'t wait for more, your doing an AWESOME job!! Happy Writing!

Star Fire ^_^

I have to be honest with you, I love you story. I found it yesterday about 8:47 pm and I told myself that I would read until 11pm and go to bed so I wouldn\'t be tired for work in the morning. The next thing I knew it was 2am and I was on chap. 21. I wanted to finish it but I just couldn\'t, I knew i was going to have a bad day at work, due to raising situations, so I left the remaining chaps for tonight giving me something to look forward to, and to take my mind ofrk srk some. I must say it worked like a charm. I thought about your story all day and wondered about what was going to happen, and that put me in my own little world which made me not pay any attention to the work place around me.. Soo, Please keep up the great work!! Can\'t wait for more, your doing an AWESOME job!! Happy Writing!

Star Fire ^_^

THANK YOU SO much for not stopping at the point where he hit the floor! i would have had to lynch you...not really...but still. LOVING this so much, hun! the scene where he practically demands that Remus stand with him was so very sweet, as is his jealousy of Bill. :) (Bill\'s life saving moment was sweet. hehe)
the in the bed scenes were very well done and though i feel so bad for both of them (had a boyfriend very similer to Severus in the fact that he couldnt seem to perform with a condom on, and wouldnt have sex without protection...) i think you pulled off the condom scene wonderfully. i really love your view of Remus, and Harry both, such a delightful change to some of the others i\'ve read recently. i am really worried about Remus, Tonks, Harry, Hermione and Severus....i hope he finds a cure!!!
Thank you so much for posting. . .

lemony-good :)

Eep! Poor Remus! Hopefully they\'ll be able to find something that will help him get better - especially if he\'s going to be Snape\'s best man at the bonding ceremony. More soon please.

please more i love the way this story is going i would love to see where it going the way you have snape is who i see him too mean and grumpy but will die for love one and will protect the children please write more thank you for shareing your work

NOO please don\'t kill Remus!! I think he and Tonks should get together. :) I think it\'s cool that you put Bill in there. :) hehe, and that he suggests Charlie to Hermoine. The condom scene was FANTASTIC!!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.