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oh, hun...i adore you! this was a great chapter. i love the wearbitch! she is wonderful! and the idea that he needs to mate is a good one. i liked the archives and her view on Remus, and most of all that she is a muggle! nice touch. and thank you for bringing up the wolf pack thing...i mean a lot of Remus/Sirius fans name Siri as part of Remus\' \'pack\' and state that part of the reason he is so sick and bedragled in the 3rd book is because he misses his pack and isnt surviving well without it. i always thought it was a good point and one that JK should have developed a bit.
oh, and Draco and Hermione\'s talk was fun too. Thanks sch fch for posting!

That was a very interesting chapter. I am very excited to how how Remus reacts to Annya.
Maybe they could have a double wedding! Wouldn\'t that be fun.

It\'s a great story....and their right...it\'s very addicting.....


more, please?

This was a very good chapter.t itt it could have done with more kisses..yups! More kisses between Severus and Hermione, between Neville and Draco, maybe even a kiss between..uh...Harry and Ron! No..no, no, no, no......

I\'ve been following this story on ff.net, but I decided to read it here when I found it. Granted I love to read I read this whole thing in a day and I really love it! It\'s the best one I\'ve read so far, or one of the best. Anywho, I really hope that you update this wonderful story soon! And another note, REMUS MUST LIVE! Thank you for your time.

Hi, cool story, one of the best WIKTT Marriage Law I\'ve ever read (so far ;-)). So now I have to read the rest (I#m at chap 9)

I really love this story. I like the way you write and the way you have developed their relationship. Please please please update soon.

I would just like to congratulate you on your wonderful story. This is the first time I have reviewed any story on this site and I have been lurking for awhile now. I have read many responses to the Marriage Law challange and I have to say that this one is one of the most impressive. You do a very good Love-sick sevvie. Please keep writing. I need to see if Remusl col come out okay or not.

Fairlight

Wonderful chapter - I hope they find out what\'s wrong with Remus! Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D

Wonderful chapter - I hope they find out what\'s wrong with Remus! Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D

I am addicted to this story! Please add another chapter soon, I can\'t wait to read what happens next. To be perfectly honest, I have absolutely no idea what\'s going on between Ginny and her father. I\'m all for a good surprise, so that add adds something to to look forward to. I only have one request: please show at least a little bit of Hermione and Severus as parents. But if you don\'t have any plans for that, it\'s okay. I mean, it\'s your story, but that is just what I would really like to see. I like reading people\'s take on Severus as a father. Keep up the wonderful wand and if you need help with this story or any other HP fanfic (ya know, proofreading, running ideas past someone, whatever) feel free to drop me an e-mail or an IM. Keep writing!!!