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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As addictive as good chocolate and just as tasty. You have created a tale that engages the mind and the emotions. Well done
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Very hot at the end. Looking forward to more soon, please.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that is all I can say to this I have read it before and I lost the internet so I could not keep up with it. I love what you have done with this story and I wait with a quiet hum for you to get the next chapter done. Keep up the excellent work
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I'll be honest - the ending didn't exactly appeal to me! Watc som someone else masturbate just doesn't do it for me.
But the rest of the chapter was seriously awesome! Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
But the rest of the chapter was seriously awesome! Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep it coming!!!! Great job!!!!!
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have been away from AFF for a while and come back to three chapters of this excellent story. I adore your portrayal of Severus and Hermione. The masturbation scene was incredibly erotic and very well written.I look forward to your next chapter :o)
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!! I Just love the way Severus is coming alive, you've got him completely bewildered.
It's been a long wait, but well worth waiting for.
POST SOON, SLEEP LESS.
5 stars as usual.
It's been a long wait, but well worth waiting for.
POST SOON, SLEEP LESS.
5 stars as usual.
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I started yesterday reading your story and could not stop until I had read the "last" chapter -which was around 4 o'clock this morning. But you actually did warn us, so I can hardly blame you for the bags under my eyes now, can I? Wanted to tell you, that you are really doing a very fine job here, with so much detailles that have not been written quite like that. (A hard thing to do with all this stories and writers.) So please update soon!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I feel so, so bad for Tonks! Though I will admit - I could see her and Ron hooking up, after he got all defensive of her!
Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D