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by MerryWizards

schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now that is kinky. granger looking like harry to sleep with snape. first thing i would do is beat grangers ass, but she may like that. then i would drag her to snape and force her to tell him what she has done.
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know this sounds kind of nitpicky..but the christmas part seems out of place...i mean you just added it at the end and it didn't fit. If you are going to have the "best christmas in 30 years" thing...then atleast put some mention in teh beginning of the story of "most of the kids are gone for christmas holidays...or "man am i glad those brats are gone for christmas holidays" or "its so nice that teh castle is practaclly empty during christmast holidays" i mean don't make it a center issue in teh story..but it is as i said before..unnecessary and out of place at teh end..it would be a amusing line if it fit.