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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was a very sweet and unusual story!
the first reviewer was right so - it deserves more words, a bit more length :) there were also some typos - it would improve this story greatly if you found time to correct them. (but then it's been 5 years since you posted this story so i doubt you'll drop everything right now to correct your old, little story :D)
the first reviewer was right so - it deserves more words, a bit more length :) there were also some typos - it would improve this story greatly if you found time to correct them. (but then it's been 5 years since you posted this story so i doubt you'll drop everything right now to correct your old, little story :D)
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was delightful; romantic and erotic and with a great little plot. Thanks for half an hour of intense enjoyment!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a wonderful tale. loved the old Snape realizing he was in the young Snape! I could almost see him doing a little " happy dance" lol
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the whole concept of this story but you really need to write it out more. It is too short to do your work justice enough. There is so much more you could add to it!