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for The Forbidden Gift

by Tatiana

person Fran
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person WendyNat
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Definitely continue it from Hermione\'s POV... pretty please? It\'s a great PWP!!
person Abra_Appelby
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I would most definitely like to read the story from Hermione\'s POV. And more after that. I hope you\'re not going to kill poor Snape for taking something that had been offered to him so willingly.
person Laurie
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you should continue this story. It has a great ningning.
person MsPixie
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, intense and excellently written. The last two lines were great and sad all at the same time. Great style.
Peace&Respect
MP
person Seva
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is fucking amazing....i love how controlling Severus is without actually having to be BDSM-ish, the way he is in this is exactly how i imagnie him to most realistically be. The ending was kind nexpnexpected, and the way it finishes in a vagely open ending is inspired.
You\'re a bloody brilliant writer!
***Seva***
person SarahS
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this at lrdandladysnape.net and this is one of the best smut/angst fics I\'ve ever read, you\'re really good at that!