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for An Easy Job

by Barrie

person kate
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Doin\' the happy dance here....

Only our favorite Potions Master and Gryffindor know-it-all would find potions recitations arousing and only you could write it so well!

I would like to note that the lemons here are as well done as the pathos, description and dialogue. In other words, it\'s another sterling FQ work!

I also want to note that it is really really really difficult to concentrate on grammar and punctuation when reading said lemons. Still , it\'s a sacrifice I must continue to make. For the greater good of course. ;)
person Alisha
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww..beautiful smut...nothing better than that is there? Is this a one shot, or perhaps will there be a couple more chapters?
person Dianne
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to the next two chapters....GREAT STUFF!!
person FadingSlowly
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow
person XxphoenixX
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... poor lonley Sevvie! Don\'t you just want to comfort him? And then maybe a bit more?
Great fic, but when will they meet again? Dun dun dun... update soon!
person Shteffi
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! Pretty Woman has always been one of my favorites and it\'s never crossed my mind that a fic based on it would be so good. I hope to see more of this quickly.
person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, sizzlin\'! I love a man who is turned on by excellence...
however he\'s only known a couple women that smart so he should be cluing in soon ;)
person Droxy
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh- How can I possibly resist the siren callo f a FQ story? it calls to me, read me, for I will give you great entertainment.

I hope you are trying to be funny, because part of me can\'t visualize HG as a hooker, and her description of why and her approach to the job just came across as funny. LOL Reciting potions formula as part of sex was too much.

But you got me towards the end, showing our PM as a lonely soul. (Sigh)

Also, I take offense here. I NEVER COMPLAIN ABOUT LEMONS!! I feel....hurt...like I am not appreciated for my ,,,,needs,,, such as the wonderful imagery of the whorehouse and decribing the character\'s dress.

I like the fact SS hair is longer. My little non-canon want for the PM.

Now if I can only get you to answer my challenge, ( one can only hope)
person aprilgrey
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was just terrific. Very sensitive and very sweet. I really appreciated the way it was written. I don\'t know if this is more than a one shot (I think it is) and I very much look forward to more if there is more.
person wanderingbob
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nifty Idea...is Snape going to learn who his prostitute really is? More story?