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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-3.... Even though this is only going to be 4 chapters (& trust me, I\'m hoping for #4 soon!!!) this is INCREDIBLE!!! The end of chapter 3 left me feeling so hopeful for him & for her!!!
I am LOVING this as much as A Terrible Temptation, your writing ability is FANTASTIC!!! Can\'t wait for more, Deb >^..^<
I am LOVING this as much as A Terrible Temptation, your writing ability is FANTASTIC!!! Can\'t wait for more, Deb >^..^<
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good -- I\'m glad he\'s catching on. That\'s very clever on Hermione\'s p tho though perhaps she shouldn\'t have pretended to be so calm and collected as she said the words. (On the other hand, that\'s probably the only way she\'d be able to get them out. \"Or maybe not\" made me laugh out loud.)
I know this is just a little plot bunny, but it\'s intriguing. Mind games always are.
I know this is just a little plot bunny, but it\'s intriguing. Mind games always are.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is simply excellent. I cannot wait for the last chapter, so write a lot faster, NOW.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Cannot wait for the next chapter. Your writing style is so wonderful.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a beautifully written story. you must continue.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like! Will Severus go back for more or will Hermione seek him out first? I can\'t wait to find out where you are going to take this!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, just one more chapter to go-I can\'t wait! I love the Miss Prunes name, btw!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So bittersweet! I feel all sniffly.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just found this piece and its THREE chapters. Three? Three?!! Where\'s four? Not fair, not fair. Talk about consumptus interruptus.
I\'ll get you my pretty, and your little keyboard too!
I\'ll get you my pretty, and your little keyboard too!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Browsing through the stories you\'ve written...this story is very nifty...I\'m looking forward to reading more. I don\'t know how you manage to balance all these different stories at once, and still manage to keep the character voices appropriate to the plot... *bows in reverence to the great writer known as friendlyquark*.