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for Searching My Soul

by snapesgirl1981

person Sky
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter hot enough to make me grin and swirm in my seat. Please continue.
person cofaym
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yummy goodness in every bite!
person blackblack_unicorn1687
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my first time reading this story, and i absolutley love it!! i cant believe i missed it. and i like your idea of it going slow and i agree with you that it will mak thesensual parts juicy! please please update soon!
person helice
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Given the way Severus was moving his hand on the bed, in circles, for so long, it is clear that he was thinking an aweful lot. Wonder what it was?
Will he put it all down to being under the influence of the potions? And it is clear now that it is caring also, not just hormones on Harry\'s part. Question here--- It\'s after 5th year, right? So, Harry\'s had his 16th b-day? Of age in the UK, now, or is it before? Even so, he must realize that he would be Harry\'s first. Is that what\'s slowing Snape down? Goddess, I\'d just leave to hear his POV---Are you going to let us?
person crudedly
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm... i like this. Are you going to put this in Snapes point of view any time? Just because i wondered why he\'s affected with all this, and why he could see Harry getting off the other day at the window... you know what i mean? Oh well, just update soon. :)
person Angie/Les`
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that you are doing quite well but what is with all of the cliffies? Update soon so you can get rid of the last cliffie.
person cofaym
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn! and I mean that in a good way :)
person Lena
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! Finally a snape that\'ll push harry away when he hesitates! UPDATE FAST!
person helice
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dearly love this story and check it even before reading my other email, when I get home from work. I am so eager to see more of what you are developing between these two! I love how Harry is beginning to come to terms with his sexuality and how Severus is beginning to learn to hee him in a new light, not prior mis-placed prejudice and false beliefs. It is going to get even more interesting, now that you have brought Harry\'s friends to GP. I am eager for more lemon, too,n len lemon \'light\'! I\'m hoping to see that they will embrace the relationship, not spend too much time angsting over it.. Better to spend time developing just who they are, or can become to/with each other, instead. I\'d love to see Sev\'s POV.
person Sydney L. D.
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, likies much!! Very good, much goodness...love the thing aboutpe\'pe\'s scent. That\'s a major thing to me, it makes the story a little more real, and all the more enjoyable. *sniff sniff* Yumm, I can imagine \'im now.... *drool* Anyway, good stuff, keep it up, yeah? ((This mun was defenitly a dogsomesome past life. ^.^; ))