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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes please continue. I\'m loving it. It is great and update soon.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Maybe a little update? Pleaseee...?
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lucky, Lucky Muse!!
I\'d love to know the tone of voice Harry used with that last exclamation in the last sentence! I like the In-character Snape, So early in the relationship, before he knows where it will go, he is only really showing his gentleness and the depth of his caring whild Harry is asleep, thought he does show caring, though a mix of stern and light, when he is speaking to him. Interesting also, How did Nev figure out that Harry\'s gay? And he knows about Snape?! Has he guessed about Harry & Sev? What does Dumblesore think----does he even guess? I would think not, for I would wonder just what he would think about all this, as well. Also very interestting that Nev has let Harry know that it is not uncommon in the wizarding world togay gay (or at least bi). Now, what will Harry do? Though I do think that he Really Likes Severus. It also seemed that he was warning Harry about the beginning of school...waiting to see how that works out.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
I\'d love to know the tone of voice Harry used with that last exclamation in the last sentence! I like the In-character Snape, So early in the relationship, before he knows where it will go, he is only really showing his gentleness and the depth of his caring whild Harry is asleep, thought he does show caring, though a mix of stern and light, when he is speaking to him. Interesting also, How did Nev figure out that Harry\'s gay? And he knows about Snape?! Has he guessed about Harry & Sev? What does Dumblesore think----does he even guess? I would think not, for I would wonder just what he would think about all this, as well. Also very interestting that Nev has let Harry know that it is not uncommon in the wizarding world togay gay (or at least bi). Now, what will Harry do? Though I do think that he Really Likes Severus. It also seemed that he was warning Harry about the beginning of school...waiting to see how that works out.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Last \'he\' in my last sentence was unclear---It seemed to me that you had Severus in a way warning Harry about how Sev\'d have to act, at least in public, after school started. Did Harry catch that notiOr dOr did I misread? And. yes there may be a few typos, but don\'t worry about it; there are very few. If I could simply write so well, much less do so well at translating anything I wrote into another language, I would be ecstatic!! Please write more, soon!
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like how the story is goin. your quotations are commas. otherwise it\'s pretty good update update update!!!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this! I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I so adored Sev\'s comments to Harry about being sure of what he was asking for. Don\'t even get me started on the lemony goodness... suffice to say that I now require a cold shower...LOL. Fantastic job... update soon!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Misspelling Privet Drive causes you to lose the respect of your readers. It helps to have all locations and names in canon spelled right. The only mistakes acceptable are the ones that are caused by the differences of the American and British version.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I made the comment before I found out that you\'re German. However, it\'s pretty easy to get the names and addresses spelt right.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was so good i love ss/hp pairings