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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15-
...oh my gawd...
I never ever want to hear that you can\'t write smut. It won\'t float anymore.
You have raised the bar of expectations my dear snapesgirl1981, and I expect the samalitality of smut -elsewear-.
I feel so humbled. I don\'t think I could ever write like this!
...oh my gawd...
I never ever want to hear that you can\'t write smut. It won\'t float anymore.
You have raised the bar of expectations my dear snapesgirl1981, and I expect the samalitality of smut -elsewear-.
I feel so humbled. I don\'t think I could ever write like this!
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really something and you have me begging here for more ... Keep it coming and update soon.
Just one little thing, I like it how you\'re trying to keep them in character and I think you\'re doing a fine job with snarky Snape but wouldn\'t Harry be a little more self-confident even in a situation like you have in chapt. 15 - I mean in bed. He always was standing up to Snape. I think he would be just a tad more challenging and trying to cover up his ignorance of these special procedures..
This is just what I think ... you\'ve asked for our opinions, didn\'t you :)
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sacara
Just one little thing, I like it how you\'re trying to keep them in character and I think you\'re doing a fine job with snarky Snape but wouldn\'t Harry be a little more self-confident even in a situation like you have in chapt. 15 - I mean in bed. He always was standing up to Snape. I think he would be just a tad more challenging and trying to cover up his ignorance of these special procedures..
This is just what I think ... you\'ve asked for our opinions, didn\'t you :)
ta
sacara
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
argh! i hope you do realise that ending it there was pure evilness!
it has become hard to find good adult storys on the net these days...
so please go on with it!
it has become hard to find good adult storys on the net these days...
so please go on with it!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very nice work. Just got done reading chapter 14 and can\'t wait for the next post.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. write more soon ok?
*smiles and dreams of hot HP/SS action....*
*smiles and dreams of hot HP/SS action....*
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You seem extremely fluent and I compliment you both on your writing and your story. Most people who speak English as their first language don\'t write this well, and the plot so far is definately intriguing. I look forward to reading the rest!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a mean time to stop, I can tell you!!! I love your Snape, I really do. That\'s the way I like him. And you have me begging here on my knees for more and that asap. - die story ist super aufregend und wirklich gut geschrieben. Ich kann nur sagen TOP! bitte beeil dich mit dem n
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You could really use a beta. This could be so much better.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil!!!!! You are the Spawn of Satan!!! This is the most frustrating cliffie of the world ::wails::
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
evil evil evil *makes cross sign* + there maybe that will make you not put anymore cliffies in the next chapters, great chapter please please update soon!