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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it can't wait till the next chapter.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If we promise LARGE amounts of chocolate will you update?
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marvellous story!! I really like it!
Will there be more soon? Pretty please?
Will there be more soon? Pretty please?
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is some story...it\'s extremely interesting. I hope you plan on updating soon!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on and finish!! I am so into this story it is so cool and it needs to updated and SOON!
Good story!
Good story!
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-
Ok my dear snapesgirl I have found your slash fic and you can\'t hid anymore. ;>
and you said you can\'t write smut! Bullshit I say! But we can\'t -do this type of smut- on FFN for ATS.
Snape and Harry, hmmm, Harry is a goner for sure...
I am beginning to think you don\'t need a beta anymore (sniff), the first chapter is well written and you do have imagery there. I am so proud.
Ok my dear snapesgirl I have found your slash fic and you can\'t hid anymore. ;>
and you said you can\'t write smut! Bullshit I say! But we can\'t -do this type of smut- on FFN for ATS.
Snape and Harry, hmmm, Harry is a goner for sure...
I am beginning to think you don\'t need a beta anymore (sniff), the first chapter is well written and you do have imagery there. I am so proud.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3-
I want Snape to cook ME breakfast.
Nice to see you are using onxy as the eye description now. Now about the chimney habit....
I want Snape to cook ME breakfast.
Nice to see you are using onxy as the eye description now. Now about the chimney habit....
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can just hear Rickman!Snape through the dialog. Very nicely done Snape here.
And you had to go and mention buttons... damn Mentioned the pony tail...damn
Logical motion and timing too.
And you had to go and mention buttons... damn Mentioned the pony tail...damn
Logical motion and timing too.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
This line is utterly brilliant and very hot!!!
Be careful what you start Potter or you might not survive the answers. Be very sure that this is what you want, that you are prepared to go through with it because I am no gentle lover and I am not going to stop just because you have second thoughts. Slytherins are demanding lovers who need to be tamed- or to suffer the consequences.
This line is utterly brilliant and very hot!!!
Be careful what you start Potter or you might not survive the answers. Be very sure that this is what you want, that you are prepared to go through with it because I am no gentle lover and I am not going to stop just because you have second thoughts. Slytherins are demanding lovers who need to be tamed- or to suffer the consequences.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 10-
Uhmmm, ok....
Some spelling and word context errors like but instead of butt. Man instead of men... that type of thing that won\'t be found with a spell checker.
Same stupid smart quotes formating stuff. (sorry)
Now, if you are going to do explicit slash my dear, you need to learn the lingo. I can\'t help you with that though. =<
It would be rather angsty if LM is close to the s wes well. There is jealousy in slash relationships as well.
You know this is the only slash story I\'ve read and I am glad you are getting so many positive reviews and so many hits on this story.
I am just so proud, and you managed to create an incrediblyy sey sev...who I want to borrow...and the hell with Harry LOL
Uhmmm, ok....
Some spelling and word context errors like but instead of butt. Man instead of men... that type of thing that won\'t be found with a spell checker.
Same stupid smart quotes formating stuff. (sorry)
Now, if you are going to do explicit slash my dear, you need to learn the lingo. I can\'t help you with that though. =<
It would be rather angsty if LM is close to the s wes well. There is jealousy in slash relationships as well.
You know this is the only slash story I\'ve read and I am glad you are getting so many positive reviews and so many hits on this story.
I am just so proud, and you managed to create an incrediblyy sey sev...who I want to borrow...and the hell with Harry LOL