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wow great story ..please update soon and later for now

angel

very interesting. Looking forward to more. :)

Happy that you are continuing the story again. Please write more soon.

You're German?Really? What a coincidence! Ich n

this seems to be a very good story, but i think there is something wrong with chapter 8. it doesn't seem to all be there, or if it is, it REALLY doesn't flow into chapter 9. keep up the good work though

That is really amazing ! I love the way you picture Severus.
The chapter 8 is not complet !

good story/ i like where you are going with the angst!!

Wow... nice. I have a German friend who isn't perfect at English so I know how hard it is but that was brilliant!


PS, how do you get the speech marks to do that funny thing at the beginning of a sentence? I can never get them to do that when I'm doing my german homework...

Is that it!? It\'s been a year since you last updated. You were updating quite quickly then stopped. What happened? I was looking forwarded to reading more of this and have been keeping an eye out for over a year. Please please either update or let us know you have given up.

Thank you

Wow! I just stumbled across this, and it\'s a bloody fantastic story! It runs well and you write Severus SO well....I love finding people who love our beloved Potions Master as much as I do, and actually KNOW who they love....you do his character very well. And I must say, for German being your first language, this is damn good! I speak a little German myself, but I\'m not going to embarrass myself at this point in time. Anyway, I can\'t wait for more! And I totally agree with you on the whole \"timid Harry\" thing, he would be a little timid....but that just makes for more fun, doesn\'t it? More, more, more!