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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled across your story today. It\'s great so far. I really like this pairing; so interesting.
You had said that you are German--I never would have guessed! Your writing is better than many people who\'s only language is English! Keep up the good work; I\'m looking forward to more ;)
You had said that you are German--I never would have guessed! Your writing is better than many people who\'s only language is English! Keep up the good work; I\'m looking forward to more ;)
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONINTUE!!!!!!!!!! I AM FINDING THIS STORY VERY INTERESTINYes,Yes, I do think you have kept the characters in their original personalities. I must express that this is a truly magnificent start on a intriging story.
Merrideth
Merrideth
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far, I\'m interested to see where this will go. Very intriguing.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hun, just read the first chapter. That was the most erotic sequence in a fan fic I have ever read. Though I am not huge on this pairing, I am just amazed at how well you scripted it. Good lord.... eeeeerrrrooootiicccc... now a Madonna song is coming to head. LOL!
hugs, Lily.
hugs, Lily.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was a little reluctant to start reading this because I don\'t often like HP/SS, but I think you\'re doing a good job of keeping them in character. If you need someone to beta, you can send stuff to me, but you\'ll have to give me at leastays ays to get edits back to you. Email me if you want help, ok?
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.O I love it so far!! Hurry and update...please!!!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far! Don\'t worry about your spelling and punctuation, as far as I can tell, you do just fine!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far. Really interesting. Keep up the good work and update soon.
~ciceronian
~ciceronian
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I DO like this story--does Snape know what Harry\'s thinking or does Harry just feel guilty? Plase hurry and write some more!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I really like it. Dark, erotic, creepy, surreal, and intoxicating.