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Snapesgirl

I\'m not a very helpful reviewer, but I really love this story so far. Basically, I was afraid you would
stop writing it if you didn\'t get enough positive feedback, so here\'s my two cents: I\'m not sure if
it\'s just me, but I feel a surreal quality whenever Harry interacts with anyone else. I love it.
My two favorite examples of this are when Snape smiles as Harry masterbates in his room to just
the site of snape standing outside; and then the conversation with Dumbledore, while Snape simply
stands and stares out the window. It seems to me that Harry is being used/distracted through his
hormones and attraction to Snape, while things with the Order aren\'t quite rigI wiI will admit to being
very paranoid, and if you aren\'t going in this direction at all, forgive my ramblings).
Either way, it\'s a great idea putting snape and harry together in this way, and I really would like to
see what happens next.
Please feel free to tell me to stuff it or whatever, but since the address is brand-spanking new, it may
take awhile to reply...
glaeken

Very nice chapter! I\'m loving this story a lot! I espeically liked the ending. I\'m pretty sure I can guess as to what happenned, but I like how you clued in on how Snape\'s lack of remarks was not a good sign. Made me laugh. Update soon!!

WOW. Can I please have some more??? I think I have fallen in love with this story. I must have more please. The plot is great, love what I see happening with Harry and Severus. ahhh, so sweet. I must have more. thank you for writing someg sog so beautifuly intertaning.

I LOVE IT. can you email me when you update?

My god, that was so good! I love the idea of Snape taking an active role, instead of it being Harry always makthe the approach, and Snape presenting the problems they will have to overcome, thus objecting, wanting to \'save\' Harry from that. I really hope that in your fic he has...er...good intentions towards Harry, not just to hurm?--m?---But I\'d love to see Severus use his greater experience to unabashadly plot and win Harry as a partner, taking control of the situation Slytherin, dark wizard style. Perhaps over the objections of others (Dumbledore?), but having won Harry, and him of age by the time it is known, there could be no effective way of prohibiting the relationship. I\'d love that! Is that what you are going to do here? It always seemed to me that a true Slytherin, having ambition, would want a powerful wizard for a partner, and would also want to woo and win him, not break him, since he\'d want him to be able to competantly support his plans or back him in a fight. Plus, a partner with spirit is not only so much more fun in bed, but also makes a more effective, useful lifemate. I think a Slytherin could be loving, while being devious and practical. And taking on a younger wizard, and training him, would also give him the more dominant position, being his mentor, being able to gradually influence, then lead him, albeit with love. Is this what is planned here? Mmm?

I am reading through this a second time, and I must ask something that I wondered the first time...Is Snape a vampire? Or is he using Legilimancy to invade Harry\'s dreams, or is it just because of their prior link? I am still trying to figure out if this is under his control or if it is just \'happeningo boo both of them?

I like this fic. I can\'t wait to see what happens now. Does Remus know that Harry is attracted to Snape?
Is Dumbledore doing all of this on purpose? Please update again soon.

OH WOW! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i like it very much

I am loving ths story! Sev/Harry and Lucius/Harry are my favorite ships, I have read hundreds, and believe me, this is a very well written fic!! I like the mature way you hare having Harry deal with his new-found emotions, and how you are keeping Severus his usual self, but letting him be more of a person, away from his role of \'Death Eater Snape\' that he has to portray at Hogwarts! This is shaping up very nicely! Please, do continue!!