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I think you succeeded. Entertaining. Thanks.

Well personally I absolutely loved it! I thought that was just great! It was amusing and hot and amusing! What more could a reading ask for! I know! If you have more time write that bigger plot! I would love to read it! I promise to review if you do!

I for one would be intere to to see where you could go with this! It\'s an awesome one-shot which can certainly hold its own...but would make for an interesting story as well.

Heather

That was hilarious.....I would like to read a continuation of this......the aftermath of what happens when they go back to school......you know Hermione and SNape fighting their attraction to each other......Harry and Ron also fighting an attraction or lack there off......The foursome of s, rs, remus,arthur and Molly was funny....never thought even thru a lust fog that they would be that wild......great story....I look forward to reading more of your work

Interesting piece, however, I would sgly gly suggest that you re-format it so that it is easier to read. I had a very difficult time getting through it. With some formatting of the paragraphs and some work on the sentence structure and grammar, it should be very enjoyable to read. Have you thought about getting a beta? Good luck!