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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh smut, yeah!!!!
If you want it as a one shot, it will stand alone.. but it would be rather interesting to see what if anything would become of it...
Only one thing... It says Ginny fell asleep before the bomb went off... then it says she closed her eyes against the images she had seen... which was it.. did she see, or was she asleep?
Joy
If you want it as a one shot, it will stand alone.. but it would be rather interesting to see what if anything would become of it...
Only one thing... It says Ginny fell asleep before the bomb went off... then it says she closed her eyes against the images she had seen... which was it.. did she see, or was she asleep?
Joy
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my lord that was unbelievable!!! please continue!!!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think you should add more! i like it alot! so funny! lol! if you add more plz email me plz!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It really didn\'t need much in the way of beta work. It was quite good. The only issue I saw was the punctuation and sentence and paragraph structure. The story itself was good. Looking forward to more and remember what I said, write the story YOU want to write, tell the tale YOU want to tell!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. It was very imaginative and an interesting premise. However, I would like to see more of what happens between Hermione and Professor Snape, and the aftermath of the love fog. Please consider taking it further!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Write something else soon.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE tell me that you will consider adding more to this!!! This was very good & I would LOVE te hoe how everyone respnds to each other after the fact, not to mention the payback that is owed to Fred & George!!! There are so many ways this story could go further, Hermione ending up pregnant (did they think about contraceptives in the fog?), Harry & Ron becoming a couple, so many things could happen!!! I do hope that you will add more!!! Deb >^..^<
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot, but this story just begs for . Y. You have to at least let us know what happened with Hermoine and Snape. Perhaps a repeat performance without any pink fog clouding their brains?
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please re-write this story!!! There is just too much good stuff in this to be satisfied with the little teasers in this one-shot. I feel like I just watched a great trailer for a movie that I REALLY want to see.
I am jumping on the bandwagon and demanding more! (would it help if I batted my eyelashes and said pretty please?)
I am jumping on the bandwagon and demanding more! (would it help if I batted my eyelashes and said pretty please?)
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U must continue this it is too funny and good please please please!!!