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for Punishment

by chcgdss

person Seva
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh this is so good! i just adore dominant severus *whimpers* more please!

person Ellen
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon! It\'s a great story--wonderful balance of pleasure and pain. I look forward to the next chapter!
person abra
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I hope you\'ll write a lot more. I can\'t believe you considered stopping after only two chapters! It is a very entertaining story. Damn, Snape\'s good!
person t
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have you even read the books? Doesn\'t look like it. Tkae your MS trash elsewhere.
person Jess
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write a really interesting story, I\'m wondering what exactly he would do if she actually gave herself to someone else willingly? would he realise he loved her? keep up the great work..ess.ess.
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No flames dear...not from me. Wonderful writing! More perhaps? I realise it\'s not much but...i would like to take this opprotunity to encourage you to continue and write more soon.
person kat
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe i live with you. lol.
person Yabo
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. The blood thing /shiver. I know I\'m a freak but damn that\'s a turn on. Keep up the good work!
person jadephoenix
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude or dudette, I am so loving this so far! very descriptive, axcellent command of langlanguage, yaddayadda, so on and so forth. I know you don\'t want suggestions really, but one word for you: chains. *evil sadistic grin*

ps: \'orange-y\'
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats a wicked awesome story. Definatley doing well on it. Anyway yeah just keep up what you\'re doing and you will make me a very happy person! - Violet