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Ch 24 - I think the title "Punishment" now refers to what Severus is doing to himself! Enough punishment - get these two togther and quit wasting her time on the boy!

Hi there!

I've just read al the the new chapters you've published since I read your story last time, and I truly loved them! I think your story is fantastic! Sorry for my dela rev reviewing your story, but like you, I've just moved and started a new school, and I've been very busy..

I really enjoyed the way Alex was toying with Severus, finally making him give in.. mmmhh. some very nice scenes!

And so it wasn't a haluscination afterall!

I'll be looking forward to reading more of your story later on, and now good luck with school and your new place.

Love Leonora.

short but good, Severus needs to open his fucking eyes and realise what he's got before it's too late

Ch 23 - you better write some ROMANCE here! Even if she goes away to school and just visits him every single weekend, you're not gonna just leave him with a broken heart? Right? Right??? Please?????

This is so good! Nice mixture of sex and romance. Keep up the good work!
Btw, this is the first story I've reviewed in the aff.net, so your story must be really good.

Bittersweet. Planning suicide or just more self inflicted pain? Just morbid speculation on my part. You are doing a wonderful job!! Keep writing!

Ah man...there's a way to make me cry. Bad girl! Good writer...bad girl.

Great chapter,
next chapter please please please.

I have always reviewed. This story is coming along nicely!! I can't wait to see what else you jave in mind!!

Hi there! Great chapter! So Severus is starting to smoke weed now, what will be next? I think the chapter was really funny, but I would like to see some more action between Alex and Severus soon though!

And how could she just disappear? Is Severus starting to halucinate?

As always I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!

Leonora.