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for Punishment

by chcgdss

person Ashley
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I love it! Get the next chapter up quick, okies?
person Nanquena
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! I HAVE JUST READ ALL 25 CHAPTERS AND I AM DYING!!!!!!! (p.s. congrats on your engagement!! i wish you both happiness!!) I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! Too...good...can't...breathe...need...more...
person lollypop
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i really really like this story and its really well written. hope you update again soon!!
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck!!!!! i cannot believe you killed her off!!! you said i wouldnt like the ending........... but i didnt think youd end it like this!

youre lucky im not still living with you or id smack you upside the head. :P
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh noooo!!! Poor Alex! And poor Snape too.. I wish they could be together and he could comfort her, I bet she needs some comforting right now. Poor girl.

What is he going to do now? I can't wait to find out. Please update soon!

Love you story.

Love Leonora.

P.S. Congratulations on getting engaged!
person JW
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25 - aaugh, he REALLY shouldn't have kicked her out!!! I hope he smartens up after this and does exactly what she wants, whatever it is, so they can both have a happy forever ending. And congratulations on yongagngagement!!! Hmm, perhaps you should finish this story before planning your wedding, which can be very time-consuming. Depending on how elaborate the wedding is, it may take all of your energies!
person JW
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 - YES, please finish the story!! Happy ending for Severus and Alex, please?
person JW
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES, please continue finifinish this story!!! I check it all the time to see if you have updated. Don't force us to hunt you down!!!
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

I still love your story! Poor Snape - though he did ask for it really. He should stop drinking soon and get back to reality, he's going to loose Alex if he doesn't. I think it is a nice twist to the story to have Alex dating Kevin, though I wish there was at least just a little spark between them.

Keep up the good work!

Love Leonora.
person Caro
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I love you story, you have got to keep on.......you can