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for Punishment

by chcgdss

person June
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whine ... it\'s been two months ... where is Chapter 27?? Please update!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was no new chapter!!! Couldn\'t you remove the \"New chapter\" message? I just got so disappointed when I noticed that there wasn\'t a new chapter anyways.

And please update soon :o)
person serena
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is so nice to read a new character with severus...i just found this story and really really liked it...i noticed you haven\'t undated in some time and i do so hope you find the time to continue this story...alex is a great character..not a mary sue at all...i have enjoyed this evening with your writing....i hope to see more...thanks, i\'ll be having sweet dreams tonight...
person Ana
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Excellent chapter! Great story!
Keep up the good work and may Snape kill the little bastards.
person Jenn
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...oh my. I love it! You absolutely have to update soon or I swear there will be a bloody murder! You update update update!
person mmd
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you must update damn you! don\'t leave all this suspense..... i can\'t figure it out though? is she dead or alive? unconscious? that is a little unclear. but by god update!
person kat
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tee hee hee. i cant wait for the next chapter..........

and by the way..... im not mad so i dont have anything bad to write. :) keep it coming.......... i want to know how this is going to end.
person Derron Comes Ripping
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God.

That's all I can say.

Oh my God.

This is hot. Incredibly hot.
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She died?!!! I didn't get that in the last chapter, I thought that she was just hurt!

I can't believe that she died!!! *cries*

No, wait - she probably made a deal with Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle, to make it look as if she had been hurt and killed... right??? *Hopes*

It doesn't seem very much in character for the three of them to actually kill her - it's much too risky - they wouldn't want to get expelled, and they didn't have any reason to want to actually kill her.

Well, just my thoughts. I can't believe if she is actually really dead! Then it must be the end of the story.

Now don't keep me waiting for too long! I'm very anxious to know what's going to happen next.

Love Leonora
person June
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 26 - wait, he had a DREAM in which Crabbe-Goyle-Malfoy attacked her, but Albus didn't tell Severus the names of her real-life attackers. He's not going after the wrong boys, is he? He's going to make it so he never gets arrested and sent to Azkaban for it? And he'll come back to her after he's done? Oooh, cliffhanger! I know I say it too often, but please update soon!