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for Punishment

by chcgdss

person Tiffany
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job so far! Every single chapter has left me lusting for more! Eagerly awaiting Chapter 29!
person June
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 28 - it\'s been two and half months - please update!! She doesn\'t need Kevin holding her, she needs Severus!! Please....... (reader whinges piteously)
person ivcacaur
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can`t wait to read more...keep up the good work.
person June
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 28 - ack! Too short! She has to tell him that in just two months, they can be together. I suppose Kevin can live, but not the other boys - well, maybe if they get Dementorized.... Thanks for the next chapter! Please, please don\'t make us wait another three months for the next.
person June
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 28 note - congratulations on the upcoming wedding! Will be happy for the next chapter whenever it gets here.
person Lyttylyst
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GROWLS

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! NOOOOOOOOO! MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!! NOT OVER! CANT BE OVER! FIX IT FIX IT FIX IT!!!! ARRRRRRRRGH!

*criessssss*

heheheheheheeh ima actress LOLOL but really........make new chapters.
person SakeisYummy
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucken god you finally updated! >< please please please update soon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was right, after all! She wasn\'t dead! Thank god! I couldn\'t see how the story could have went on if she was dead!

It\'s good to see you back :o) Looking forward to more chapters!
person June
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 27 - yay, a new chapter!!! Okay, it\'s a good thing that Albus has interfered here. I am certain Severus made the potion correctly, so perhaps it just takes time for it to work through all her injuries. Hopefully, it doesn\'t take too long for you to work up another chpater of this story! Thanks for updating. [PS - I still hope those boys suffer greatly for what they did to her.]
person ICCU
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I so love this story, I come here everyday to see whether you have posted another chapter or not. I can