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for The Game

by Dorothee

person Spearsister
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh you is kinky. Me like! really great story, well written and I really liked your explaination on the whole pureblood intrbreeding thing.
person CristhianDena
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, this first two chapters are so cool, they are funny and kinky and smart. not to mention completely captivating and addictive. keep writing because youu are so good. Oh one thing, not to bwe rude or anything when u are saying that someone is sitting down you spell it \'sad\' but it is \'sat\'. okay tanx for ur stories they are real cool.
person Ashley
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea of the story and I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if one of the girls numerous partners fell in love with them, and got all jealous as they continued \"the game\". :)
person me
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! All I can say is: please hurry up! Icouldn\'t find another story quite like yours.
person david
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hermione she isn\'t blonde she has brown hair
person shirin
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, it\'s such a goooood story. Please write more soon!!!!!! I can\'t wait!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Amy
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, not so sure about the incest bit but hey! It\'s your story hun

Later

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person Ilove2readlemons
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Who doesn\'t like smut. But i doo have one question, I thought Hermione was a brunette. It\'s your story. Rock on.
person Totallylost
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This first part of the storie is very instiring and i can\'t to to read the other chapters. just so you know i think you meant foot not food during the restrant scene thanks and keep writeing
person JennaSlytherin
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is awesome... it\'s very interesting.... Lucius is soooooooooooooooooooooooo tasty!!!!