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Has anyone told you that this is wonderful lately? In case you haven\'t heard it before, let me be the one to tellyou...This is WONDERFUL! You literally had me on the edge of my seat (I almost fell out when my 3 year old decided she wanted me to look at her and turned the stupid chair!) I\'m sorry that Hermione and Severus weren\'t cooperating for you on this chapter, but I hope that you scolded them and they learned their lesson, so next time won\'t be difficult. I hope the updates arrive soon! As for the rain, San Diego has gotten more rain in the past week than all of last year. Monday was by far the worst--Rain, hail, wind, flood, rainbows, and snow. All within a 10 mile radius. During rush hour. Doesn\'t mother nature know that we don\'t know how to live like this? It was like she collected all of the rain for the last 2 years in a big bucket, and then dumped it on SD county in 45 minutes. So much FUN!! But now the sun is out. I don\'t understand the weather.

*squee!*

Not only did you capture the emotions of the situation so well, but you managed to keep them both in character and throw in a tiny lemon. Nicely done.

Good job. I am glad that you kept working though the chapter. It is very good! I am so glad to see that they are getting along so well. I love the part that you added about Hermione liking Snape\'s snarky personality. I think that was very good. Now...are they going to end up living together? i hope so...how about married? Kids? Will their be a sequal.

Pssst - secret! While I ADORE Alan Rickman, I don\'t picture him as Snape when I write. My Snape is kind of a cross between Trent Reznor and Sandman. You\'re doing wonderfully.

The ending to that chappy was... nummy ;) I understand how hard it is to keep up posting chapters; I can\'t do so myself. Probably why I only ever write 1-off fics anymore.

There is just so much to praise about this story that I don\'t know where to begin. I love the way you\'ve kept both Snape and Hermione completely in character, yet you\'ve imbued them both with sensitivity, vulnerability, sexiness, and a snarkiness that is most appealing! They\'re grown-ups and there is nothing I like more than reading about a mature sexual and emotional relationship developing between these two. My first reaction to this chapter was, \"Awwww . . . dammit . . . awwww!\" (LOL) They\'re just perfect together. And I\'m anxiously waiting for them to declare their love for each other . . . don\'t keep us waiting too long, girlie! This is one of my favorite stories out there.

A really great story. Thank you.
And I hope, despite he fact that they did IT, there will be some a lot of more chapters, because I am also interested how the plot will continue. Poor Neville, I neverugheughed that he will get this far. And how big is the thread to Severus? May he decides to stay in the muggle world and become cook in thet little caf

VERY well gone!! Yet again another Fine chapter!! Very sexy indeed, keep up the great work, can\'t wait for the next update!! Happy Writing!!

Star Fire ^_^

Skip the thanks, just please write more!

*melts into strangely contented-looking puddle on floor* That was so so so beautiful. Amazingly well written, passionate and just....perfection in \'love scene\' form. This is rapidly becoming a read-over-and-over story! *grins widely* On a slightly odd tangent I found something really rather hillarious about the \'no, that was a pillow\' (not sure if that\'s the actual quote but you get my drift) when he was searching for the cover, *giggles* Yes, I am very strange...(or so people keep telling me!)

The schoolyard chant in question is identical in the UK, lol, isn\'t it strange how these things just pop up everywhere!

Jeremy Irons! THATS who it was! I\'d been trying to find out for ages! My only experience of him was as the voice of Scar in the Lion King, (which I always thought was rather sexy...the voice I mean..) so could never put a face to the name, and had also been rather perplexed at not knowing who the rather fabulous Snape was in the BBC thing! (which was completely hillarious, in my admittedly biased he stole the show, even though his part was kind of perepheral.e hae had about 3 lines and just had to look aloof for most of it...grrr...)

Didn\'t know JKR wanted Rickman *swoons, lol* as Snape? as in actually requested him? Well, I certainly would...*sighs*

I just ADORE \'your\' (as it were) Severus, every one of his attributes is so in keeping with my image of him, he even like Monty Python and pretends not to! I\'ve GOT to find me the real-life version of this man!

Apologies for the ludicrously long and mostly irrelevant review, in a more succinct manner of speaking, i LOVE this story beyond all reasonable measure! Please make it a 40 chapter-stylee epic! It would make me so happy!

In admiration, and much anticipation of a new chapter,

***Seva***