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for Teacher, Teacher

by k8gsmith

person spaz141
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant, love it, two more chapters makes me happy. I will gladly join the food induced sensuality club, just tell me how to sign up. Personally I like shout outs (when they are at the end) and especially when there is one for me *hee hee* I have to confess, I was confused at the begining and went back to chapter thirteen because I though I missed something...and thats why they call me spaz. Thanks for writing and I can\'t wait until next time.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14... Though this started out with a bit of a scare, it ended BEAUTIFULLY!!! I do so LOVE the way that you write them sharing each other, so sensual & loving!!!

I have very much enjoyed each & every chapter of this story & though I will be sorry to see it come to an end I know that the end will be everything the rest of the story has been... PERFECT!!! I hope that you feel how much sharing your talent is appreciated!!!

I do hope that you will let us know what happened to Neville that called Severus away, very curious to find out!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How sweet! *sob* Great work as always!
person Katta
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just found this story and read it in one sweep. It\'s great! And you\'re right, much as I love Alan Rickman, Jeremy Irons would have made a great Snape (and I did see the BBC spoof). You kept worrying about Americanisms, but I think you did really well. (Much better than most). Not as a criticism, but if you\'re interested, I only found these: Chapter 2, the closet would probably be called loo by an English person. In Chapter 6, pound notes were abolished quite a few years ago in England (the lowest denomination is now
person Frienuarkuark
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on you know I\'m only baiting you, don\'t be lured by my puns, thougey aey are my sole contribution. :)

I loved this chapter, it IS fun to flummox the Hermione isn\'t it? Want my very own Sevvie-kins! :::pout:::
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Many many thanks for this delicious fiction! I\'ve enjoyed reading it so much! Much kudos to you for that wonderful lemon which must have been one of those organic ones, you know: small but absolutely bursting with flavour. I really like your writing style, a wonderful blend of humour, wit and a terrier-alert sense of the dramatic. Grand stuff, Kate! Hope to read more of you soon. Blessings, Kait x
person ancientgirl
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I\'m so glad you had them both be honest and just tell each other their feelings and not beat around the bush about him wanting to stay and her not wanting him to leave.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13... Another FANTASTIC chapter!!! SO.... will he be staying with her? I do hope so as they are just so right for each other!!! He could stay with her & still work at commercial potions & doing research... I think he would enjoy coming home at the end of the day to do some more personal research on & with Hermione;-) Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Dear God! That was so hot! Do you think Hermione would mind if we traded places for awhile? :) Keep up the good work! UPDATE SOON!
person spaz141
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end? I hope not. I have a new appreciation for food induced romance. thanks.