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You are my heart and sole, you know that, right, but you did have me herring off in another direction, which made me crabby, still I will clam up and go to bed, before you school me in the ways of puns. Another delightful chaptert hat had me laughing, sniffling (though that could have been the dust) and making like happy noises that scared my cats. :)

Hon, I doubt anyone would ever LET you write one-off\'s after this one lol
Another beautiful chappy! Love her reaction to waking up without him... And to find the note :)

lovely chapter... keep the lemons coming!

the last sentence (home!!! home!!??!!) made my breath hitch and my heart stop.
of course the entire chapter was perfection, but that last little bit... maybe its the vodka, or the really long long last couple of days. but i think im about to cry.

ive always liked your writing. (le duh) but very rarely do i find ::any:: lines that give me that stomach lurch feeling of fic-etty goodness (your beta is the only other person who has managed one in a while)

um. beautiful. did i mention how beautiful that last line was?
i dont think i reviewed last time, i might have, but if not, you are lovely, your fic is lovely, and although ill be happy to see the whole happy ending thing, i certainly hope you wont make us all wait too long to read any more of your writing. start a new one the second you finish this one. cant have moaningmyrtlehui withdrawals, now, can we?!!

xo...m...me...

Beatifully written . . . as usual. I loved how you showed their vulnerability and their lovemaking is so emotional. Smut with a heart, LOL. Simply wonderful!

AHAHAHAHA - showing my YOUTH? Thank you SOOOO much! My 40 year old body thanks you immensely.

This is wonderful!

Technically, you could have ended the story there and I would have been a happy woman. But I was thrilled to tha that there might be another chapter or two. :)

I loved the letter, it was just snarky and playful enough. I got goosebumps reading the last few paragraphs. You are doing such a great job making one feel the emotions of these characters. I hate to see it end but I\'m sure you are going to give us a fantastic ending.

That was so sweet how he knew she\'d panic when she found him gone. So sweet. I am just wondering if they could BE more vunerable. I love this fic. How many more chapters canexpeexpect? When are they going to live happily ever after? (I am such a sap!)
Cheers. (sigh)

Thank you very much for sharing this with us. The whole story has gievn me much enjoyment!