rate_review Reviews

*Faints* That was just AWESOME!!!!! Need I say more??!!?? You are a wonderful writer full of great ideas. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, I have been checking every day for the next one. I think I just might be addicted to your story. LOL I keep rereading and rereading waiting for the next chap. Well, Keep up the great work... Happy Writing!!

Star Fire

Please, more! I do really enjoy the balance between annoying Snape habits in spite of himself and his capacity for tenderness.

I love the story. I see why Barrie is always raving about your skills in her own opening notes to each chapter. Oh and the puns are great. The only thing i ask is that you get on barrie about updating at least one of her stories per week. Thanks.

I\'m still really enjoying this story - but I have one little teensy bit of concrit to pass along - it was especially noticeable in this chapter that the POV kept switching from Hermione to Severus without any sort of indication that you were going to do it. This can make for confusing reading - it\'s generally best to stick with one POV at a time, and have a definite break when you switch. (Some fanfic authors use a *** or something similar to indicate that break, even a few carriage returns would help). Other than that, I am enjoying both your plot and characterization, and the lemons were very juicy and delicious :)

*mumbles incoherantly, before sighing, and attempting to sort out thoughts...* That was....so...beautiful! I really am running out of adjectives to describe your writing, but allow me to assure you that this is utterly fantastic. I LOVE your description, wit, and creativity! (and i also love the pers tha thanks to reviewers...lol...i lead a sad life!) Please don\'t let Severus leave, ever!

with, as ever, much admiration and anticipation of a new chapter,

***Seva***

;-) steal away... lol. Bless ya! Kait xxxx

I like the choice of Old Blue Eyes...very much so. He\'s always been a good one for wooing women.

Somehow I get the impression you are smiling like the cat that got the cream while writing these last two chapters.

Very well written, as usual.

You style strength is your ability to gently weave the humor into the story.

\"Roses are red, violets are blue, I like conflakes, now let\'s go screw.\" Had to... you KNOW that I had to... MMMMMMMMMMMWA!

Updateondeonderful!
I still wonder what happened to Neville, and why Snape was forced to leave Hermione without waking her, but he stays with her - in the muggle world. This is great for our old Potion master :-)hopehope for more since I am not able to write so great for myself!

Tiny Dreamer