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for Teacher, Teacher

by k8gsmith

person jenocclumency
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! I love this story. Perfect ending :)
person Seva
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It ended....That\'s it for Teacher, teacher....I feel all adrift, and....puroposless....

person /Gavin\\
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Kate, thanks for the link.
I am thoroughly enjoying this, especially in the way that he\'s seducing her with food.
\"He was going to woo Hermione Granger.\" made me laugh out loud. It just sounds so funny when thinking about cannon Snape and \"woo\" in the same context...
Chuckles,
/Gavin\\
person Adriana
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I just wrote a long review and lost it all when I couldn\'t connect to the server (I\'m currently gnashing my teeth and wringing my hands. Hope this doesn\'t lead to a trip to the dentist or the psychiatrist).

Review Recap: Wonderful, yadda yadda. Loved the cooking stuff, yadda yadda . . . it was so original, yet completely in keeping with my mental image of Snape and Hermione. Want to try seducing my husband now with food . . . um what else? Oh! I\'m a sucker for a happy ending and really enjoyed the sticky little Snape children. My own snot-nosed son\'s name is Ryan, so I particularly liked that. You\'re now one of my favorite authors . . . hope you continue writing at this site . . . Loved it, love you . . dda,dda, yadda. (the \"yaddas\" are where I originally waxed poetic about your story and your writing, LOL. I\'m just too lazy to do it again.)

Thanks for taking the time to do such a fabulous job!
person spaz141
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sequel, sequel, sequel...okay enough shameless begging. I, as you know, loved this story and enjoyed the epilogue. I also now have a new appreciation for food. Thanks for writing, hope to see more from you in the future.
person Aurora
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Myrtle, I was teasing you over at the GB. :)I recognized your food oriented fanfic, of course. So puhleeze write chapter 16. Ch. 15 leaves us hanging with intriguing possibilities.
person Droxy
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, after eating Indian food for three months your discussion of Italian has left me with severe cravingr tor tomato, organo, and rosemary. You are evil to do this, you know. What I wouldn\'t do for a good bottle of cab or merlot, it doesn\'t really exist here.

I so loved the humor in your last chapter, \"you speak fluent Dumbledore\" is just indicative of the lines that had me cracking up.

What makes your humor so good is it seems so natural.

Interesting evaluation on the financial status, every author has their views of the wealth of SS. What is interesting is the evaluation of HG\'s status, good research on your part. I like \"techical details\", the things that make a story a story and not just PWP.

Great response to the challenge, if the originator doesn\'t give you the prize (e.g. major advertising) then shame on them.

Thanks for the happy open ending.

Oh yeah, I\'d \"keep\" this Severus any day. ;> LOL
person TinyDreamer
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Finally an update! Oh, I like it of course and I am soooo sad that there will be only one chapter left. This story is absolutely yummy, with both, food and \"you-know-what\". Should try to make some of these recipes by myself, though british breakfast isn\'t my thing :-)

Thanks again,

TinyDreamer
person Kait
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So good I read it twice! (And got my shoutout too) Hope you\'ve had a nice time with the kids on school vacation! Lurve, Kaitlovesthepotionboy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... I can\'t belive we are on the verge of the end of this story, I\'ve really enjoyed the ride, or in this case, the menu!!! Another FABULOUS chapter, you deserve praise, no lashes from me!!!

HOLY MY, I can\'t believe Neville!!! I know he thought his plan was good, but if he had any sense he should have had someone else brew for him;-) I am glad that it all worked out in the end, Severus never ceases to amaze!!!

Hermione & Severus\' venture sounds very promising!!! Can\'t wait to see how it goes!!! The only thing they didn\'t seem to answer was where Severus was going to be living!!!

As always I will be looking forward to your next update!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<