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Very interesting! I like your writing style, and I\'m curious to see where you go with this!

I just read chapter 3, I bust out laughing about the time I hit the fridge scene....

Of course Snape can cook!

Hermioneis such a muggle eating frozen food!

SQUEE!! MORE! I was gone for a while, but you updated, so I\'m happy!! :dances: I loved the line \"Surely, God was convulsed in paroxysms of sadistic laughter.\" I feel that way sometimes. Continue with this wonderful specimen of fiction so I can be happy more often!!

Oh my god! I love a man that can cook. If he cleans too, I may climax. :-)
Why is Hermione so sullen? Other than the obvious death of her parents. Or is that it?
More please Myrtle!!! I love stories where Hermione and Severus are stuck in close quarters together.

Hmm- OK

I like this snarky Snape. You have an interesting sense of humor, that permeates the text of the story. For example, the refernce to sugar making Albus off balance, james bond, the Dr. Suess grinch reference, etc.

I can\'t exactly nail this style, but it is very humorus while trying to be serious or is it serious but trying to be hurmorus? LOL. Gentle but blatant humor, odd isn\'t it? Well, crap, I can\'t explain it but it is interesting, unique and fun to read.

I can see you have a unique style to FQuark, but I can now see your beta influencnce by reading your original material.

Why does AFF use 8 point fon for reviews, too damn small for my old eyes and fat fingerrs!

Oh yes, this is very technically well written, so no comments are needed.

And the best part is that he doesn\'t make any for her or offer her any of what he has made, that is so Snape. Heh, heh! Perfect characterizations!

I love a man that can cook, there\'s just no telling what else he could do with those hands.

Chapter 3.... No magic huh, you know Severus wasn\'t too happy about that!!!

I guess Severus\' plan to be late somewhat backfired on him;-) I am sure that Hermione was quite surprised that Severus was not only able to fend for himself in the kitchen, but that he could make himself a satisfying meal with the meager supplies she had available!!! I am quite curious to see what happens after dinner!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<

a brilliant and oh-so-typically male deduction, he decided that his discomfiture was her fault and her appalling lack of manners must be due to that time of the month.

LOL! Oh I hate that. We couldn\'t possibly have a real reason to be upset...it must be that time of the month. It\'s great that you used that!

And she thought he\'d fall apart without magic...sounds like a great cook!

Heather
Oh, and thanks for the egg links...I have always had a hard time with that myself :P

Kate,

I really like your fic! I can\'t wait to see where you take it next.
I think your Severus has a very fixed and narrow definition of our Miss Granger. She is going to surprise him, isn\'t she??
Write more soon!

Cheers!