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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great last chapter. Especially love the conversations between them. I am truly enjoying this story and it\'s great that you actually put them into the muggle world. Makes the storyline really interesting since you are so convincing in your descriptions. Can\'t wait for more!
Love
MP
Love
MP
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story!!! I can\'t wait to see all the lessons that Hermione manages to teach Severus. I can only hope he\'ll teach her one or two himself? *evil smirk*
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*swoons* I love this fic. The back and forth banter is just so them. More soon please.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I would truly love to hear Dobby say \"sod off\".
I am greatly enjoying this story, and love your sense of humor.
I am greatly enjoying this story, and love your sense of humor.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... I really like the way that you are working these 2 toward being friendly to each other (at least to start with)!!! The way that Severus is viewing things, him being the student, making the effort not to be so mean & seeing Hermione as an equal can only prove to make this story more interesting!!! It seems that Albus may just have known what he was doing sending Severus to stay with hermione;-) Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^<
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All right Kate, I must now join FriendlyQuark in the insistence that you post additional installments to this very engaging story. You wouldn\'t want me to start snarling would you?
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. This really is brilliant.
One tiny point - most of the time it doesn\'t remotely show that you\'re not British, but you refer to a \"sidewalk\" in chapter 5 and it jars, rather. No Brit would use the term - it\'s a pavement, to us.
lianliant story, though. I\'m really enjoying it.
One tiny point - most of the time it doesn\'t remotely show that you\'re not British, but you refer to a \"sidewalk\" in chapter 5 and it jars, rather. No Brit would use the term - it\'s a pavement, to us.
lianliant story, though. I\'m really enjoying it.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like the beginning of a beautiful relationship. I like where you are going with this and I look forward to seeing what is next.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A rose to you for really great imagery and description.
Is Sev going to rifle the Grangers LP collection and play Cest la Vie?
I am going overseas to work and I may be away for a week or so.
Happy writing
Is Sev going to rifle the Grangers LP collection and play Cest la Vie?
I am going overseas to work and I may be away for a week or so.
Happy writing
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4.... Severus dreaming about Hermione, Hermione swooning at Severus, sounds like things just might start getting interesting!!!
It\'s nice to see the 2 of them making an effort to be more civil toward each other!!! It didn\'t even seem like it was as much of a challenge for them as would be expected!!! I\'m actually looking forward to their shopping trip to see how many little jabs they either take (or at least think) toward each other!!! I\'m also curious to see if Severus will take on his regular teaching persona while teaching Hermione to cook?!? Maybe he might just do a lot of up close to & hands on Hermione teaching;-)
Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
It\'s nice to see the 2 of them making an effort to be more civil toward each other!!! It didn\'t even seem like it was as much of a challenge for them as would be expected!!! I\'m actually looking forward to their shopping trip to see how many little jabs they either take (or at least think) toward each other!!! I\'m also curious to see if Severus will take on his regular teaching persona while teaching Hermione to cook?!? Maybe he might just do a lot of up close to & hands on Hermione teaching;-)
Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<