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for Teacher, Teacher

by k8gsmith

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7... This was a WONDERFUL exploration into them learning more about each other!!! I must admit that I do like smut between these 2, but I also love the romance & seeing them learn each other!!! I am looking forward to watching their relationship grow!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
person ancientgirl
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Their time together is progressing nicely. You\'re doing a great job at showing Snape the Muggle world and letting Hermione be a teacher.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was priceless! Love the comment about being out Slytherined by a Gryffindor. LOL The store too was great. I\'ve never thought about one from a wizarding standpoint. They all seem to use the softer fire forms of light. I imagine our sterile lightbulbs would be quite bright.

Anyhoo, loving your story, and eager for each installment.


kiri
person Barrie
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can so see poor Severus floundering in the Supermarket. (Sorry, I am starting the fish puns early) I myself am constantafflaffled by them. Is it my imagination or do they change the layout regularly just to confuse shoppers? I am really loving this story. Guess that means you will have to WRITE MORE. Ha!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... I see that there is learning going on for both parties!!! I like how Hermione is making the effort to tell him things while not making him look foolish & he in turn has done the same for her!!!

I am looking forward to Severus overseeing Hermione\'s making of dinner, that could prove to be quite interesting!!! Will he be behind her, touc her her hand, leaning over her or rubbing against her much;-) That would be a cooking experience I could enjoy & I think Hermione could too!!!

Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
P.S., Good Luck with your diet!!!
person Dawningskies
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tyler\'s Ultimate anything makes my mouth water. Did you see the one on chocolate cake... drool... Er... back to the review. ;) I have one complaint: Not enough story! I want more! More, more, more, more!!!! That didn\'t come across as too demanding, did it? ;)
person scifichick774
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee hee. Oh, that scene with the butcher was priceless. And the ending paragraph, where he\'s blaming Hermione for paying in his mind - very Snape.
person IrishRavenX
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will wonders never cease? I like the story, and hope to see more of it, soon?
person JCC
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, great humor. I know you are very busy with the other \"in between gig\" the Sub Rosa universe; but there are other solar systems. More, please.
person azulkan2
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Liked the revelation for Snape at the end of this chapter. More soon please.