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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"influenza1918 -- I\'m just gonna clam up here (but I will tell you, your \"mussel\" comment led me to make a menu change in ch. 10!)\"
I think I might be too shell-shocked to respond properly...but hell, who am I to knock you off your perch?
God, I really need to stop. You inspired this insanity. Excellent chapter as always.
I think I might be too shell-shocked to respond properly...but hell, who am I to knock you off your perch?
God, I really need to stop. You inspired this insanity. Excellent chapter as always.
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Sigh) That was so sweet. Just lovely.
Okay, what\'s next? (Oh I also liked how Hermione was prepared to come into the room swinging when she thought Severus was in danger.)
Okay, what\'s next? (Oh I also liked how Hermione was prepared to come into the room swinging when she thought Severus was in danger.)
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Smokes! That was so romantic! It was terribly out of character, but it was so sweet! I loved that he was so freaked out that she thought there was a Death Eater there! But the dialogue between them was beautiful!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You\'ve combined two of my great loves-- HG/SS and snarking at Bill Gates. I\'m grinning from ear to ear right now.
-Reha
(off to read another chapter)
-Reha
(off to read another chapter)
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was just looking through AFF.net to see if anything cought my eye, and I saw this and started reading it. I must say you have me hooked. This is a great start to a WONDERFUL story, I can feel it. YOu are doing a wonderful job. Keep up the great work, and I CAN\"T wait for more!!!!!! Happy Writting. Awesome Story!!
Star Fire, (Lexie)
Star Fire, (Lexie)
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter as a whole, the natural progression of their friendship is great. : )
Had to laugh at both of Hermione\'s sexual experiences. Her second reminded me, horrifically, of one of mine. LOL ::shudders:: Too short or too long, that seems to RL LOL Yay for fiction where you can at least dream about the ideal. ::snickers::
As always, eagerly awaiting your next update.
Kiri
Had to laugh at both of Hermione\'s sexual experiences. Her second reminded me, horrifically, of one of mine. LOL ::shudders:: Too short or too long, that seems to RL LOL Yay for fiction where you can at least dream about the ideal. ::snickers::
As always, eagerly awaiting your next update.
Kiri
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He could teach me a few things as well! I liked the image of Severus staring at her as she ate pizza and the lo mein noodle line cracked me up. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh Now Now the end of that one got MY heart racing a bit, just thinking about how Severus could give Hermione that little experience she hasn\'t had yet. At someone else\'s hands, that is. Hooooweeee! I can\'t wait to see how this one plays out. Write fast!!!
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8... What an appropriate chapter title!!!
Sounds like hermione\'s sexual experiences weren\'t really experiences, more like unfortunate occurances;-)
I really like the fact that they are both having \'thoughts\' while in the supermarket!!! They are both learning so much about each other that it only stands to reason that the next logical step for these 2 logical minds is to start thinking about each other in a more physical way!!! I am looking forward to seeing who makes the 1st move!!!
Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<
Sounds like hermione\'s sexual experiences weren\'t really experiences, more like unfortunate occurances;-)
I really like the fact that they are both having \'thoughts\' while in the supermarket!!! They are both learning so much about each other that it only stands to reason that the next logical step for these 2 logical minds is to start thinking about each other in a more physical way!!! I am looking forward to seeing who makes the 1st move!!!
Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<