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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!
All they did was eat and I\'m flushed and my heart is all aflutter. Whew! I think I need a cool drink and a fan. great job!
All they did was eat and I\'m flushed and my heart is all aflutter. Whew! I think I need a cool drink and a fan. great job!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez - it took her long enough to see what he was doing. ;) Glad she did though and I can\'t wait to read what happens next.
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted tt yot you know how much I am enjoying the story. Snape\'s method of seducing Hermionie is just wonderful! Dang, it made me hungry too! ;)
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had a big lunch. I\'m not hungry.
Well, I *wasn\'t* hungry.
Gordon bennett, that may have been the most sensual chapter I\'ve ever read. Wow.
Superb stuff!
Well, I *wasn\'t* hungry.
Gordon bennett, that may have been the most sensual chapter I\'ve ever read. Wow.
Superb stuff!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it getting hot in here, or is just Snape? :) Great chapter! I\'m definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was amazingly erotic. Good grief. Instead of giving all the inch by inch details of what body part is touching what other body part (stunningly boring), you described a sensuous feast, appealing to many sen and and then tied the ribbons on with Snape\'s watching Hermione lick her lips, and her realizing that the man she wants wants her. Oh, my goodness.
This is re-readable!
This is re-readable!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it so much I thought I would review it twice!
I thought the line about a grand unified theory of time, space, matter, consciousness, and chocolate was wonderful. Do we thing thiswherwhere the physcists have been going wrong, failing to take into account the chocolate?
And I particularly liked the Severus wouldnt be so obvious as to give me oysters, when he damned well was.
It\'s going to be tough to do lemons to match this quality. No pressure or anything.
I thought the line about a grand unified theory of time, space, matter, consciousness, and chocolate was wonderful. Do we thing thiswherwhere the physcists have been going wrong, failing to take into account the chocolate?
And I particularly liked the Severus wouldnt be so obvious as to give me oysters, when he damned well was.
It\'s going to be tough to do lemons to match this quality. No pressure or anything.
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful meal and the silence said more than any words could. Well done!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how you made food so sexy. I don\'t think I\'ll ever be able to eat fast food again without feeling cheap. Usua an an author leaving off right before the good stuff (i.e. the smut, not to imply that the rest of it isn\'t really great) leaves me annoyed and slightly angry. Nonetheless, reading this has left me satisfied (weird choice of words, I know, but nothing else seems to fit) and yet anticipatory (sp? too lazy to think about it). Anyway, to cut to the chase, great stuff... update!