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Another excellent chapter.
Neville Longbottom? Neville Longbottom??? The master mind of a conspiracy to destroy Severus Snape. Now I have heard everything.

I especially liked your description of Severus in the entry way , \"he was a man both revealed and obscured by the light.\" Way cool.

Kudos dear and I can\'t wait til chapter 12. (sex scene - pant, pant ... no pressure.)

Cheers.

Chapter 11... Well at least things were only temporarily sent off track by Albus\' crappy timing!!! I really enjoyed the way that they were both acting as if this situation was a bother, only to have Albus bring Frank up on his way out!!!

You did a FABULOUS job on the suspects... who would have expected Neville?!?

I am really looking forward to the next chapter as I am sure that it will be written just as WONDERFULLY as the rest of this story!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

Darn Dumbledor... Now, there\'s bad timing... and then there\'s BAD timing. *sigh*

As for my hyper ventilation, M-Myrtle... You should be flattered!
I haven\'t had a good panting for a longer time than I care to remember. ;)

Bibi ***humming on \'Unforgetable\'***

Did I mention that I love you? No? Well, I do! I really loved this chapter, infuriating old coot and all. I am glaat Iat I wasn\'t the only one who liked the chocolate line too. Heh, heh. They fell for it, hook, line and sinker.

i suppose its ok that youre \"slow\" (definately dont get sick! i might die!), as long as your chapteeep eep being as worth the wait as this one was. oooh oooh it was gosh darn enjoyable, id say. and no, i didnt get out much. when im not reading an update to a lovely fic such as... oh i dont know... teacher teacher perhaps, im sitting staring at my computer screen willing for an email notification of the update of a highly entertaining and well written fic, like... oh i dont know... teacher teacher.
and as dorky as it is, i always get warm tingly fuzzies when an author puts a response to me in the a.n. mainly because i sometimes worry that my attempts at wit and pathetic vocabulary might convey to someone who doesnt know me some level of distaste. its always good to know that ones compliments were, in fact, recieved as compliments.
will you think me too pervy, if i tell you that this is a great chapter, and i luuurve you, but go on and write us some lemons, now!!! please?
my love and thanks to neville, by the way, for being the reason our dear sevvie-kins has been ::forced:: to ... er... \"get to know\" our darling miss granger.
and some major props to your music tastes, as one doesnt get much more romantic than frank sinatra or nat king cole.
hearts, and... um... chocolate. and um... valentines day love and umm... ooh i know! yummy delectable five-star-restaurant-worthy gourmet meals!!=) wished to you.

xoxo
...me...

oh, one other thing, more of a response to your authors notes...
id be happy to work in said aff.net daycare if it meant more updates, quicker!!
i think alot of people would...
and other than the whole putting out the fire thing, kids pre pretty independant... let em do that stuff themselves.
hm. maybe thats why my best friend doesnt trust me to babysit her 2 year old for more than an hour...
anyway, point trying to make, is, of course...
your writing = good. me = loving your story. you = neeeeed to write moremoremore

ok. thats it. i swear. go wr now now. please?
xoxo
...me...

Yes Yes! Lead him up the stairs! Go Hermione! Darn that old foggey! What miserable timing he has! Bah! Excellant romance you\'ve got going here! I hope I wasn\'t offending you when I said he was OOC. I just always picture Snape a lot less romantic, but eveyones interpretation of Snape is different! At any rate I still love your story! Isn\'t that what counts? Write on!

That was soo sweeat Sat Severus did after the dinner. I had a feeling that someone would drop by during all this, I just didn\'t know who.. I also like the little comment that Albus said to Hermione. And I like the way that Hermione took matters in her own hands, to restore Severus\'s confidence about the whole situation between the two. I also Love the song, it was just perfect. How do you come up with things that will fit the moment perfect? You are just outstanding, you are one of my Favorite writers, and I am always checking for updates. Well, Bring on the next chapter soon PLEASE. Keep up the AWESOME work. Happy Writing.

Star Fire

You have a lovely story here - I\'m looking forward to more.

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)

I really like how your Severus is kind of middle of the road- Not fluffy happy bunnies, but also not all Evil! Woe Is Me! either. I think you\'ve just about got Sevvie nailed down. I loved that line about prime rib in your author\'s notes. I also love your frequent updating.....hint hint.....