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for Teacher, Teacher

by k8gsmith

person ancientgirl
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot, very hot. I have to say though I can\'t imagine anyone BUT Alan Rickman playing Snape. I read the books and see him. I can\'t imagine Jeremy Irons! Besides he doesn\'t have the voice! God that voice, that silky velveensuensual voice. No, there is no question in my mind who Snape should look and sound like. I can\'t wait for your next chapter.
person latinchik
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooo! why did you do that you just stopped right there i could die of anticipation. OOOOO this sucks i really waneted to kreadreading and you just stopped why oh why are you doing tis to me now its goin to take you foreevr to do the next chapter please keep writing and update like tomm. pleasze ur killing me here. (weeping) can u tell that i think its good lol pleaze im desperate (pouting) lol
person Javen Green
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... right now the only thing after reading your last chapter was Thanksgiving Dinner, with all of your fans instead of annoying cousins going LEMONS! LEMONS! LEMONS! instead of TURKEY! TURKEY! TURKEY! : )

Wow- that was great. I only hope the guy I marry looks at me the way Severus looks at Hermione in this story. My neck\'s kinda itching, you know in a-- somebody kiss mere!ere!--- kinda way. Whew!

Keep up the outstanding work!
person mama wolverine
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is charming! Sweet, sexy, funny, totally engaging. I would love to be seduced this way, as I\'m sure so many others would. I finally got the chance to get back to this story and am loving it. Like a good orgasm, getting there is half the fun. Please, please continue quickly, no slowly, no quickly. >:-) Tell the cats (dogs?) to watch the kids and write on!
person Seva
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why didn\'t I get round to reading this before now? WHY? *bangs head against table in manner of dobby*

I\'ve been seeing it around, as it were for ages, but have only just made the forray into this breathtakinwondwonderfully amazingly *rambles on for some time, using all the adjectives at her disposal* fabulous story. I\'m only sorry that my command of the english language isn\'t anywhere near good enough to praise you to the extent I\'d like to, as I fear that if i gave a full and frank account of everything i love about this story you would have fallen off your chair in boredom! And do I detect lemons coming up? Well that just makes it all the more imperative that you update very very very soon! (Seriously though, I would love this fic even if there was no hint of lemony-freshness...which is a very rare compliment for me to bestow!)

In anticipation, and decidedly humbled,

***Seva***


person Miki
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! Finally, Severus is gonna get some good lovin\'....oh, sorry! I just become a bit overly excited. I love that it is drawn out and so lovely...keep on going!!
person jordy
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aff daycare? Good idea! I actually run a daycare, so I know all about the necessities...lol. Thank goodness for quick reflexes with a mouse button! ;-) Nothing like getting interrupted during that pivotal moment that you\'ve been waiting for for longer than you knew you were waiting for it. Seems to have happened to me one too many times in life. Especially with kids around! Love them to pieces, but they can have the WORST timing, can\'t they?
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pats left chest repeatedly* I\'m all a flutter. How sensual. Excellent story. I can\'t even write properly just now to tell you. Still fluttering until the next chapter,
Da Feather
person spaz141
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks.
person icestar
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. I never knew Neville could/would be that bitter at Snape. I mean, i\'ve had my share of really mean/evil teachers, but Neville dit stt strike me at someone who would/could hold a grudge, much less carry out revenge. But that just goes to show that first impressions aren\'t everything. And Rita Skeeter would make a comeback, well that\'s unexpected. I really can\'t imagine Snape in black fur, much less as an animal. What would the potion have done exactly? Well, anyway, great job, and I\'m eagerly awaiting chappie 12! Adieu!