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Oh God I loved this! It\'s so witty and based in normality but with that rare quality that makes it wonderfully captivating!! I hope it\'s far too dangerous for him to leave for ages!! Please do some more! That slow build up was excruciating but all the better for it. Well done!!

I stumbled across this story, am not even finished with what\'s been posted, and yet feel compelled to review (which I rarely do). I adore your tone -- you manage to keep Severus perfectly in snarky-chara and and yet make him human all at the same time. The story is light-hearted and funny without being silly. The grocery store trip was priceless. I\'m going to have to read everything you\'ve written. Reading this makes me feel as though I\'m skipping....does that make sense? Thanks!

I apparently had lost track of this lovely tale at some point but, I am glad to have found it again! What a lovely tale and I know what you mean about shooing the kids away while trying to write. hehe I have been trying to hold a coherrant thought while on Vicodin and motrin. Seems I had a tubal pregnancy and had to have an operation to take care of the problem. The drugs make me sleep lots so there is even less time for writing. Bummer. Heh....Great fic!! I\'ll be keeping up with it.

*Sigh* Beautifully written! I love the physical descriptions, of course, but the emotions were just as wonderful. Kudos!

YEAY! They did it! (The sexual tension in the air was making it kind of hard to breathe.) I want to thank you. What a wonderful way to come home from a weekend away! (Just came back from Vegas. Had a great time, but it rained. And rained. And rained. The whole drive there, which should have been roughly 6 hours, turned into 8. The 15 mile drive to the Calif/Nev staine ine took us 45 minutes(!!!) It was frustrating as hell, but we were excited to have a weekend away from life and kids, which only seemed to make the drive that much longer.) The way back was not much better. People just don\'t know how to drive in SoCal! Not to mention that there are mudslides and floods everywhere, because of the horrible fires San Diego had back in October/November. Everybody is panicking. Ahh, so much for that relaxing weekend!! Lol! Well, at leat I got to catch up on my favorite stories! That just makes me happy. Can\'t wait for more! Hopefully, Hermione and Severus will be cooperative and let you update really soon! Do you think? Maybe you can talk them into it. Happy day!

Nice piece of lemon art you wrote there. wow and thanks.

That was absolutely beautiful.

Hum baby - I love my lemons! Yummy delicious! You\'re right about the puns the scales have fallen from my eyes. :)

Chapter 12... This is BEAUTIFUL!!! I think this is one of the most sensscenscenes that I have ever read!!! It was loving, touching, AMAZING!!! It was well worth waiting for them to get to this point!!! FABULOUS!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<

Oh my God, that was so beautiful! (Warrents the exclamation point.)
It was so slow and romantic. It was hot and sweet and lovely all at the same time. (sigh)
I don\'t think that I can come up with enough positive adjectives to describe your chapter. (sigh -again)

I must steal from Wayne\'s World for a moment... \"I\'m not worthy, I\'m not worthy.\"

Oh my... thanks for writing that. I can\'t wait to see where you take them on this journey in the next chapters.

Kudos dear!!!!