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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
am obsessive compulsive, maybe, but it sounds awkward to use nubile two times, even though it\'s 2 paragraphs away: it\'s a fancy word and it makes an impression. Methinks a one-shot fic should only contain any fancy word once (unless, of course, there\'s a special intent behind the repetition).
that said, i loved the smut. would have been happier had this been draco... but still, i loved the smut ^_^ !
that said, i loved the smut. would have been happier had this been draco... but still, i loved the smut ^_^ !
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a shame this is \'complete\' I\'d love to read on and on... I love that line \"pranced out of the closet\" clasic! Thanks for the smut. have a cookie.