AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Dirty Deeds II

by Shiv5468

person AureliaFlint
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your previous story. I am looking forward to this one.
person Sarah
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHA! Tigger Severus? Love the image...
person WendyNat
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, happy happy day! I loved the Tigger analogy :)
person Hawklaw
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More Dirty Deeds!!!! I would be doing backflips of joy--if I could bend that way. As it is, I\'m grinning like a madwoman. By the way, I can\'t wait to see more revenge on Dumbledore. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
person Colleen
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Oh this was such an absolutely fantastic surprise! I shoulde moe more breaks from economics; it has such nice rewards. Definitely like Tigger Severus, but Hermione\'s right, Eeyore Severus has his good points too.
person Rilla
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bless your heart! I was so happy to see this this morning. Love the way Hermione manages to get her way with Dumbledore by subtly manipulating Severus (in a good way of course). Looking forward to more!
person kate
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, the Eeyore/Tigger reference wins the prize for best unexpected but hilarious reference in this chapter (although I reserve the right to change that, once I\'ve looked up what a laocoon is). I love that there is at least one bloody ingenious turn of phrase that no one\'s used before yet is perfect in everygle gle one of your chapters (grumbles about you being too damned talented by half and you could skiv off once in a while to reduce the pressure on us mere mortals) The The meeting of the \'rents looks to be quite the chess match -- though given Hermione\'s inner Slytherin (and I don\'t mean not-so-little-Severus), I\'m sure there will be no questions as to the outcome. Since the apple doesn\'t usually fall far from the tree, this could actually be anti-climactic. The meeting, I mean; not the aftermath.
person wiccanwillow
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea Hermione. Great Dumbldore butt-kicking. More soon please.
person Tycho
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it! Although I\'m not sure whether to envy or pity your significant other if this is what you are actually like. I certainly envy Sev. Looking forward to the next bit.
person Temptation
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOO Glad to see II posted. Can hardly wait to see what happens next!!! Will Albus every figure out what he has to do? What will the parents say/do? Can\'t wait to see if there are wedding arrangements going on (how bad will that put Albus out)?? Keep it coming, I\"m enjoying it again.