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for Dirty Deeds II

by Shiv5468

person kate
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks first and foremost for picking up and running with the story. It\'s such a happy thing to pull up the list and see you\'ve updated!

Second, thanks for the laocoon clarification (and thanks for the email; I felt like my favorite actor had responded to some fan mail I\'d sent!).

Third, LOVE the third letter (but of course) and the fact that you can work in a ref to LL-B, who I\'ve only just been introduced to and can SO see his inner Lucius. Or is that Lucius\' inner Laurence? Again, I would never have imagined throwing his name into the story but you not only did but pulled it off!
person Rilla
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the last line. Can\'t wait to meet Hermione\'s parents for real. And this: \"If he had got to rule the world, by god, it would have been colour co-ordinated.\" had me laughing out loud. Fantastic.
person jkrazed
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, so happy to see it this afternoon.

\"You can see him going all Lawrence Llewellyn-Bowen about the whole thing\"

Some of us in the US are lucky enough to have BBC America and know who he is. My sister jokes that she\'s in love with him. She calls him, in her best slang, her \"baby daddy!\"

Thanks for the update!
person Hawklaw
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"...boiling in the oil from his own hair.\" That is priceless! Thanks for another great update!
person Sci-Fi Nut/ JStockert
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this one as much as the first thus far. Especially liked the following line: \"If he had got to rule the world, by god, it would have been colour co-ordinated.\" Laughed myself silly. Looking forward to more,
~Jules
person Kaz
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey Shiv, what a GREAT sequel! I can\'t wait till he actually meets the parents!!! but can we please have another chapter on Biter Bit? u sed \'something mite happen soon\'??? does that mean one new chapter, or two? please, more, more, MORE!!!
person FriendlyQurak
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you more and more every day, Shiv! You make me laugh so hard. Tosser - Have to remember that word, so very ...descriptive. LOL
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
maahauhaaa

more. please, if you will.
person e
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oy! oy! oh rapture! i have a whole new dirty deeds to get addicted to!
and excellent start already!
and if i remember correctly, dirty deeds one had this lovely updated often and regularly thing going on.
please tell me, darling shiv, that you have not changed your darlin ways?!!?
at least i know that your writing hasnt lost an the the fun
woop woop

xoxo
...me...
person crissy
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t get over how sweet they are! so adorable!