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for Dirty Deeds II

by Shiv5468

person GEmory
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad you\'ve done another chapter! I really love your writing, especially this story and prequel. Gives me a good laugh every time!
person lindai
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely NOT a doormat Hermione! I\'m so glad that she\'s influencing Severus to turn into a more sociable being....but I love his influence on her attitude. Long live snarkiness! Linda
person moxie
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE! MORE! NOW!


I must know what Albus will be up to. I love that he isn\'t a twinkly omniscient benevolent soap bubble.
person dementres
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN WILL WE GET ANOTHER CHAP!!!!! sorry tend to b a tad fiesty myself, hehe. love it, obviously.
person Jean Lamb
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know some good meet-the-parents stories (including the one where my husband to be backed into my mom\'s car). I am looking forward to more chapters a LOT (You have read the one where Granger\'s parents offer a free dental makeover as the wedding present, haven\'t you?).

More!
person MaddyRiddle
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter (as usual)! I like the draft letters... tough thing to tell the parents...
But why on earth you make me think of Lockhart in the A/N... don\'t get me wrong, I like Kenneth Branagh a lot, but Gilderoy it\'s not something you can compare Lucius with... bad images.

Keep writing and update soon... please?
person Lessa
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as usual. Since I just rewatched the first two movies again today before reading this I have the most unusual images in my head. I love this story and am now stuck trying to imagine what a good job for Lucius would be to take advantage of his talents.
person AureliaFlint
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv - I absolutely love LLB. He paints in leather pants-you have to love a guy who does that, especially a straight guy! LOL! Lucius as LLB is really too funny. I am glad to see that Lucius is still his badass self in this story. I hate it when he gets all fluffy and sweet. Am looking forward the an update!
person Skjeve
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lucius! :D

Okay, that\'s out of my system.
Another fabulous chapter! Good to see Hermione\'s ability to *ahem* sort things out runs in the family ;)

\"But why doesn
person LittleBird
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"he coulver ver refuse his son anything from Nimbus 4000 to a saviour of the Wizarding World of his own.\" The us vus visuals were hilarious. I love him in your stories!!