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for Dirty Deeds II

by Shiv5468

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Valerie Lestrange
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED DIRTY DEEDS I, i thougth i needed to tell you, actually this is my first review ever to any storie in this site and i think u deserve it. I just loved it so much. im a huge HP fan, i have everyting from the dvd's to ps2 games, posters and promotional articles. I'm actually working on my own fic, is one involving snape (I LOVE HIM SO MUCH) and the character i see myself like in the HP world, i hope people like it as much as i liked your storie. And something off the record, could you tell me what i need to do to post my fic here. Great work, i hope dirty deeds II is as good as the first one, just a few pointers, i will like you to keep severus as much in character as you can, like he's in the books, i just love him as a big bad sulky guy.
person Mooooork
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*knock knock*

helloooo??

Anyone there? This thing hasn\'t been updated in months! And I want to read the next bit!
person Laura
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I completely love this series you have started. Its dangerous to read at work for my laughing out loud and occasional snorting. And yet I couldnt pull myself away from it. Please tell me it is not fated to be an eternal WIP?
person Kimi
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I love bossy, take charge Hermione. I also like how you portray Lucius. Can\'t wait to see how he takes the idea of the wedding and reception at his place.

Kimi
person Kimi
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! An update on one the funniest stories I\'ve read. I love the characterizations in this set of stories. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Alwritermom
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Shiv is back! I know i\'ve told you, but just to make it official for everyone else to read: Everytime I read these HG journal stories that your wonderfully humorous mind has created, each and every time, I leave my computer grinning from ear to ear. I\'m so happy you are posting again.
person Erica
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good! I love all the little extras you throw into the story. It makes the piece so...savory! I loved the Lawrence LB comment. I adore watching him on the BBC. You have a lovely writing style and I greatly appreciate your stories. I was never a Hermione/Snape fan, until I read your work.
person cressida
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the fic, very amusing. Bit of a problem with scrambled text though ... makes it hard to read in parts.
person Hello
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know you spelled LLBs name wrong. It is Laurence...no W. Other than the strange typos it is a great chapter.