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*laughs softly* I wonder if they will realize that just perhaps they are better for each other than the youngest Weasleys.

Damn, so they were with other people and they did that!?? HOT!
(not that I consent cheating, but please be aware we are reading FICTION!)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow! Thank you for the great reviews--I really appreciate that you all took the time to give me your feedback. This is actually my second fan-fic, my other one is \"Stuck With You\" which I wrote under a different name--trylymad. I\'m having trouble with that account so I started this one.
I\'m not as proud of this one as I am of my first one. I kind of rushed through it at work ;) I just typed it right on here without a rough draft or anything. I see now that it does have a non-con feel, though unintentional--it\'s similar to how my first time went, I guess.

~Pansy~

Liked the end...saucy little devils...You can never
tell about a guy\'s virginity, but Herm\'s in trouble..LOL

I think a sequel is in order. Maybe recognizing since it was easy to get together while seeing other people that maybe they care for each other more than they realize. After this they get together perhaps a year or two later.

Is this your first fic? Well done! It borders a little on the non-con, with the last second plea for him to stop, but still a really good one shot. And I also think you should carry this out, a few years later kind of thing...

Interesting ending. Not sure if it was your intention, but IMO the story reads like a rape. Maybe you could reconsider the one shot and add maybe a chapor tor two of follow up. Thanks.

Nice, very nice. Love a Harry/Hermione fanfic now and again. And this was especially good. Also them swearing never to tell had me cracking up. Too bad it\'s a one shot because I could really go for more of this pairing. Awesome story.